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by gmat740 » Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:09 am
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In his work, Leon Forrest is more reminiscent of Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives and Toni Morrison’s mythic languages than James Joyce’s internal explorations.
(A) In his work, Leon Forrest is more reminiscent of
(B) Leon Forrest writes more like
(C) Leon Forrest’s work is more reminiscent of
(D) Leon Forrest reminds one more of
(E) Leon Forrest’s work more resembles that of

[spoiler]IMO-E
OA-C[/spoiler]
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by goelmohit2002 » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:26 am
IMO "E" is wrong...since there is no logical singular noun to which "that" can refer...
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by nitya34 » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:48 am
Why A is Wrong?

it uses correct Modifier but wrong Comparisons?
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by hetavdave » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:55 am
Choice A incorrectly compares Leon Forrest with other artist's work (Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives) (Toni Morrison’s mythic languages ) (James Joyce’s internal explorations)
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by haptas » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:58 am
A is wrong because we should compare noun with another noun.
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by gmat740 » Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:20 am
How can C be wrong?
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by Domnu » Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:18 am
C is not incorrect; it is the correct choice. Here's how I went about doing this:

Eliminate A, B, D: Leon Forrest is being compared to other people's work.
Eliminate E: the 'that of' here is completely unnecessary. This gives us E.
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by hemanth28 » Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:18 am
Domnu wrote:C is not incorrect; it is the correct choice. Here's how I went about doing this:

Eliminate A, B, D: Leon Forrest is being compared to other people's work.
Eliminate E: the 'that of' here is completely unnecessary. This gives us E.
you mean B :lol:
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by Domnu » Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:01 pm
hemanth28 wrote:
Domnu wrote:C is not incorrect; it is the correct choice. Here's how I went about doing this:

Eliminate A, B, D: Leon Forrest is being compared to other people's work.
Eliminate E: the 'that of' here is completely unnecessary. This gives us E.
you mean B :lol:
Are you sure? The answer is C :wink:
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by gmat740 » Sun Jun 21, 2009 6:31 am
Yes OA-C
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Re: Leon Forrest

by perfectstranger » Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:45 am
gmat740 wrote:383
In his work, Leon Forrest is more reminiscent of Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives and Toni Morrison’s mythic languages than James Joyce’s internal explorations.
(A) In his work, Leon Forrest is more reminiscent of-Here comparision is made between Leon Forrest and Henry Miller although, it is not supposed to be . Comma separate Leon Forrest and In his work so the meaning is not clear-
(B) Leon Forrest writes more like

(C) Leon Forrest’s work is more reminiscent of-Correct since the comparision is made between Leon Forrest's work and that of Henry Miller-
(D) Leon Forrest reminds one more of
(E) Leon Forrest’s work more resembles that of-eliminate E since ...Henry Miller's ...narratives gives the meaning as ''that of'' . -

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Re: Leon Forrest

by maihuna » Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:10 am
gmat740 wrote:383
In his work, Leon Forrest is more reminiscent of Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives and Toni Morrison’s mythic languages than James Joyce’s internal explorations.
(A) In his work, Leon Forrest is more reminiscent of
(B) Leon Forrest writes more like
(C) Leon Forrest’s work is more reminiscent of
(D) Leon Forrest reminds one more of
(E) Leon Forrest’s work more resembles that of

[spoiler]IMO-E
OA-C[/spoiler]
Yes, in A, in his work, and then Leon Forest is making the comparison ambigious, though modifier is correct,

in E, in more resembles , more is modifying resembles, so the than later on in non-underline portion is mis-matched, which is un-idiomatic.

B and C are non-sensical.

It left us with C: Here is the analysis for C:

Leon Forrest’s work is more reminiscent of Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives and Toni Morrison’s mythic languages than James Joyce’s internal explorations.

Leon Forrest’s work is more reminiscent of X and Y than Z
X: Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives
Y: Toni Morrison’s mythic languages
Z: James Joyce’s internal explorations.
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