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by Xbond » Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:39 pm
Although ice particles in the upper atmosphere benefit Earth in that they reflect and absorb solar radiation, acting as a global thermostat and thus keeping Earth from either burning up or freezing over, they also
accelerate
the destruction of the ozone layer by reacting with chlorofluorocarbons (CFC’s).

(A) acting as a global thermostat and thus keeping Earth from either burning up or freezing over, they also
accelerate
(B) acting as a global thermostat and thus keeping Earth either from burning up or freezing over, while also
accelerating
(C) act as a global thermostat and thus keep Earth from either burning up or freezing over, while also
accelerating
(D) they act as a global thermostat that thus keeps Earth either from burning up or freezing over, even
though it also accelerates
(E) they act as a global thermostat to thus keep Earth from either burning up or freezing over, but they also accelerate
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by tohellandback » Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:12 pm
IMO A

C,D, and E are out because we need "acting".

B is out because "while" is redundant as we already have "although" .
The powers of two are bloody impolite!!
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by Xbond » Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:37 am
the right answer is A
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