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by sarthak » Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:24 am
During an ice age, the buildup of ice at the poles and the drop in water levels near the equator speed up the Earth's rotation, like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in.

(A) like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in

(B) like the increased speed of a figure skater when her arms are drawn in

(C) like a figure skater who increases speed while spinning with her arms drawn in

(D) just as a spinning figure skater who increases speed by drawing in her arms

(E) just as a spinning figure skater increases speed by drawing in her arms
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by thephoenix » Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:22 am
sarthak wrote:During an ice age, the buildup of ice at the poles and the drop in water levels near the equator speed up the Earth's rotation, like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in.

(A) like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in

(B) like the increased speed of a figure skater when her arms are drawn in

(C) like a figure skater who increases speed while spinning with her arms drawn in

(D) just as a spinning figure skater who increases speed by drawing in her arms

(E) just as a spinning figure skater increases speed by drawing in her arms
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OA is E[/spoiler]
we can not have like as the comparison is b/n two actions.....
who is used as a restrictive modifier not reqd here so IMO e
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by reply2spg » Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:38 am
Class question and without the answer is E. I will rephrase the sentence 'the buildup speed up the Earth's rotation like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in'
sarthak wrote:During an ice age, the buildup of ice at the poles and the drop in water levels near the equator speed up the Earth's rotation, like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in.

(A) like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in - Comparing verb (Speed up) with noun (spinning figure skater). Incorrect

(B) like the increased speed of a figure skater when her arms are drawn in - we need to compare something, wich is spped up the rotation with something, spped up some other rotation. Therefore, this is wrong.

(C) like a figure skater who increases speed while spinning with her arms drawn in -- Same as A

(D) just as a spinning figure skater who increases speed by drawing in her arms -- Same as A

(E) just as a spinning figure skater increases speed by drawing in her arms -- Correct 'the build up speed up ratiotion just as a spinning figure skater speed up' proper comparison. Therefore, correct
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OA is E[/spoiler]
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