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Please evaluate my profile

by N:Dure » Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:05 pm
Hello!

Please review my profile:

Male
Egyptian
25
Target MBAs: INSEAD, Columbia, LBS , Oxford

* Education
Bachelor of Business Administration with Honors - the American University in Cairo (No.1 Ranked in Egypt)
GPA: 3.54/4.00

Non-degree Study Abroad Program, University of St. Thomas (UST), Minnesota, USA
GPA: 3.64/4.00

GMAT to be taken on 29/11/2010


* Work Experience: 3 years (4 by program start)

General Branches Manager & Board Member, Berkeley Automotive (Family Business), Cairo, Egypt Feb. 2008 - Present

"¢ Planning monthly and quarterly sales target plans and marketing plans
"¢ Leading a team of 25 associates and motivating them to achieve sales targets
"¢ Monitoring & developing the business's branches network, service centers and brand portfolio
"¢ Planning monthly print campaigns, promotional offers and online social media advertising
"¢ Increased sales volume by 52% in the second month on the job, and by 66% in Q2 2010.
"¢ Procuring and managing a stock inventory of 300+ cars and maintaining relationships with the company's suppliers, locally and internationally (Egypt, China, UAE).
"¢ Organizing several entertainment and social responsibility events at which the company is the main sponsor.
"¢ Shifted the company from being a 1S Authorized Dealer to a 3S Sole Agent, Service Provider and Importer.
"¢ Opened new business lines with car suppliers in China and the UAE.
"¢ Reporting to the Chairman & Managing Director of the company.

After-Sales Intern, General Motors Egypt, Cairo, Egypt July 2008 - August 2008

"¢ Handled customers' complains and promptly responded with solutions
"¢ Co-designed a training system for new GM employees, dealers and authorized service centers
"¢ Co-organized and promoted GM summer service clinic for Chevrolet and Opel cars
"¢ Gained knowledge about car engineering, technology and spare parts
"¢ Reported to the After-Sales Department Head


Arabic Teaching Assistant, University of St. Thomas - Department of Modern Languages, St. Paul, Minnesota, United States of America, October 2006 - May 2007

"¢ Guided the students to become better speakers and assisted the professor
"¢ Provided feedback on the assigned homework and evaluated the students' performance
"¢ Gained knowledge in how to communicate and deal with different cultures

* Honors & Awards

"¢ Academic Honor Certificate, AUC Honors Assembly, 2008.
"¢ Nominated for the International Student Leadership Award, University of St. Thomas, 2007.
"¢ Dean's Honors List, University of St. Thomas, 2006-07.
"¢ The International Student Scholarship, University of St. Thomas, 2006-07.

* Extracurricular Activities

"¢ Participant, Auto China 2010, Beijing, China, April 2010
"¢ Project Head, Opel's Hope On Wheels Cancer Campaign, The Help Cub, AUC, Spring 2005.
"¢ Founder & Co-Host, The Euphoric Sessions Radio Show, KUST Radio, UST, Spring 2007.
"¢ Head, Reach Out Committee, Volunteers In Action (VIA), UST, Spring 2007.
"¢ Volunteer English Teacher, Language Development Committee, Alashanek Ya Balady (AYB), AUC Student Union, Fall 2007.
"¢ Student Leader, Friends of International Students (FIS), Office of International Student Services (ISSO), AUC, Summer 2007.


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Finally I had a question, if I scored low on the GMAT (say 550 - 650) would my chances still be good for my target schools? Given that I provide strong recommendations (professional and academic) as well as well-written essay questions.

Thanks ahead for your help!
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by Stacey Oyler » Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:03 pm
Hi,

Thanks for your post.

Please see my comments below:

Your unique work experience with your family's automobile company will certainly help you stand out in the applicant pool. You'll want to highlight your leadership experience in your essays. It sounds like you have been able to wear quite a few different hats and you should speak to this as well.

One area you may wish to improve upon is your extracurricular activities. It doesn't appear you've done much since graduation. I suggest seeking out ways to build up this area. Perhaps use a hobby as a springboard for opportunities.

When it comes to your school selection, your GMAT score is pretty important. I strongly encourage you to prepare and aim to score at least 700. Anything less will make getting into your choice schools a bigger challenge.

Best,

Stacey
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