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by Ashujain » Sat May 26, 2012 8:53 am
Q: Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.

A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent
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by digvijayk » Sat May 26, 2012 3:05 pm
a. No. "it" could be nuclear power or energy
b. No. "uses"
c. Keep it.
d. No. Change in meaning.
e. Keep it. Compared with is used correctly.

IMO E.
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by jimmyjimmy » Sun May 27, 2012 11:53 am
A..
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by Ashujain » Mon May 28, 2012 1:59 am
OA is C as it is most parallel.
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by avvnsmohan » Wed May 30, 2012 11:19 pm
IMO C.
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by ankita1709 » Thu May 31, 2012 8:52 pm
Can some one explain it further..
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by dhonu121 » Thu May 31, 2012 9:28 pm
Its C here.
Parallelism and Pronoun reference.
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by Ashujain » Thu May 31, 2012 10:08 pm
ankita1709 wrote:Can some one explain it further..

The phrase after 'comma' should be parallel to 'percent of the energy produced in France'.

If you see option C: whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany

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