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I'm planning on applying in Round 1 this fall to HBS, Wharton, Columbia, and MIT.

Age: 30 (will be 31 at time of entry)

GMAT
: 720

Education:

College -- Completed a BA/MA program from a top 40 school according to USNWR national university rankings. (Turned down offers from top 10 schools to attend the top school in my home state on a full ride). GPA was 3.86 in my BA and 3.89 in my MA (health care field). Graduated summa cum laude and Phi Beta Kappa w/r/t the BA, which included a triple major in 3 liberal arts disciplines and a science minor.

Law School -- Ivy league top 10 law school. GPA was a 3.21.

Years of experience: 4 years FT (49 months to be exact) of big law firm Commercial Real Estate/M&A experience. Resigned from job and took a "break" for 7 months for personal reasons. (Did some non-profit consulting work part-time for 3 months during that 7 month stint and also remained very involved with community activities and did some GMAT prep and self-exploration while also taking care of mother who was going through chemo.) Will have about 18 months of FT work experience as a law school administrator at point of application, 25 at point of matriculation.

I've seen that on some apps the schools also count up FT internships during college/law school. In that case, that would add another 19 months onto my tally, not to mention the time between November '12 - Summer '13 before starting grad school (apparently some factor that in as well?) All in all, that would put me at 93 months of FT work experience.


Other/"Extra's":
-Have served in leadership positions of 3 non-profit Associate Boards in my city (one dedicated to domestic violence and two to empowering minority high school students), eventually becoming the Chair/President of 2. Was also very active in my firm's diversity and pro bono committees (and led sub-committees/programs for 2-3 years there). Also the director of a pro bono legal clinic for victims of domestic violence (with personal experience handling family law and immigration cases for some of these clients) and handled an interesting international human rights case while at the firm. Also a VP of an ethnic bar association that has 6000+ members across north america.
-Award recipient of 5 awards in the past 2 years for my community involvement, pro bono legal work that I do, and law student mentoring I've done, 1 of which was a national ethnic bar association award.

Why the MBA Story:
I entered law school thinking I wanted to practice health law and be a hospital administrator. I worked at a hospital law department my first summer and found that I did not enjoy practicing health law but I fell in love with real estate law and really enjoyed the real estate work I got to assist with that summer. The hospital was buying up properties in low-income neighborhoods and building hospital facilities thereby improving the surrounding neighborhoods. I also grew up in that city and saw how blighted neighborhoods were redeveloped through various new businesses and homes being built so always had a strange fascination with urban development. (Added to which, I moved from my Midwestern home to a South Asian country at the age of 9 and spent a few of my formative years struck by the stark contrast of wealth and poverty and again, saw how different neighborhoods were improved by commercial real estate development while, in that case, still preserving historic buildings.)

I came back to law school after that summer experience and took courses in urban policy and real estate from the business school at the university and also some real estate law courses. I entered a big law firm that did public finance/commercial real estate in Fall 2006 but the market for that work dried up FAST and the group ended up cutting people so I ended up doing M&A/private equity in the Corporate Law department instead before leaving after 4 years.

During my time at the law firm, I also did a 9 month real estate training program for minorities from '08-'09 which again, was a terrible time for real estate jobs, and so the 7-10 jobs that were promised to be available for the 25 people in the program at the start of the program ended up going down to 2, both of which required a relocation. Hence, I could not transition to the industry as I had hoped. I also met with various urban housing authority people (many of whom had JDs) and did informational interviews with them to try to get some advice about breaking into the market. All of them said that if I want to do real estate and urban development work, I should go back to school and get a MBA and also possibly pick up more courses in urban policy and urban design. I applied for jobs that made next to nothing in the hopes of just breaking into the market but had no luck despite making MANY contacts and connections and attending several professional real estate association networking events. As such, I'm now looking to apply to programs with solid real estate offerings but that also have great urban policy and social entrepreneurship course offerings.

Target Schools (reasons):

-Harvard (great social entrepreneurship track at the b-school, few real estate course offerings at the b-school as well, ability to take up to 4 RE courses from their school of design and from MIT as well as the public policy offerings at Kennedy)
-Columbia (great MBA with a focus in Real Estate, though it's more finance-based. They also have a wonderful RE Development Masters that has awesome design and development training that is 12 months -- would even consider doing that as an add-on to a MBA (which would teach me the finance stuff I need) but again, am afraid of looking like a degree collector.)
-MIT (great MBA with a focus in Real Estate; also has a Real Estate Masters)
-Wharton (great MBA with a focus in Real Estate)
-also considering USC and Cornell but for the fact that with USC, I don't want to be too far from my parents (who live in the Midwest), and Ithaca seems like a depressing place to live.

Areas of Concern (ordered by greatest concern --> least concern):

-My age/work experience. I've been told that certain schools will view me as too old/too experienced, Harvard especially. I had hoped to apply in Fall 2010 but got derailed because my Mom got sick (more on this below). Essentially, this has meant that I'm tacking 2 extra years of WE onto my resume and the work that I'm now doing fits a "side" passion but has nothing to do with what I want to do with a MBA.

-Fighting the Degree Collector Stereotype. I'm concerned I will be viewed as indecisive or as a degree collector because of my love of learning and diverse areas of interest and also as someone running away from the law. I've got a reason for wanting the MBA. I haven't been in school for a while so I clearly have thought this whole thing through and done my due diligence as to why I want the degree. But, still concerned about this.

-Law School GPA being so much lower (3.21) compared to the (3.86/3.89 in my BA/MA program). (a) law school was wicked hard, b) I was studying at a much better school than my undergrad, and c) my Mom was first diagnosed with cancer during this time and it was my first time living in a city away from home).

-Weight. I know that this one might sound silly to some but I'm a plus-sized girl and I've been told by friends who conduct admissions interviews for top 10 B-Schools that one of the questions on their evaluation forms is appearance. While I'm a fairly confident person and also have learned to dress in suits that are more flattering to my figure (as much as that is possible), I know that I've faced weight discrimination in the past. I'm working with a personal trainer to try to drop some weight before the fall and have also scaled back on my outside activities to focus more of my time and attention in the next few months on the application process and my health but I don't anticipate being able to get out of plus sized clothing by the time of my interviews.

-The 7 month gap. I was the only person who could care for her and b/c of all of the layoffs going on at my firm and the fact that I was not being given the option to take a leave of absence, I up and quit and moved 350 miles to be at home. I don't regret the decision in the least (especially since I had determined that I wanted to change routes and go back to grad school). But, not sure how the adcomm's will react to such an explanation.
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by Jon@Admissionado » Thu Mar 01, 2012 12:22 am
First of all I have to say that you have an extremely lucid vision of where you stand who you are and what your weaknesses and strengths are. EXTREMELY. In reading your profile I would have written about the same obstacles as you.

But here's the good news: you have a WONDERFUL profile.
And you seem to have a good handle on the writing side of things as well. USE your stories to your advantage. Transform what seems to be a weakens into a strength. You are applying late because your mom battled with cancer? LET THEM KNOW!!! You have weight problems? Come clean and attack it head on. You will have so many opportunities to tell true deep and moving stories in which you can rather impress the Adcom with your perseverance and fortitude.

The trickiest thing I think will be to give your reasoning for your career goals, because you won;t have that much space to give them the whole speil. But essentially you will have to condense your love of real estate into a quick and efficient answer.

So, I hope this motivated you, because that's what I was trying to do!

Now, all you have to do is start preparing for your applications!
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by LawGirl30 » Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:06 am
Jon, thanks so much for the kind words and encouragement! It actually helped me to get over some kind of mental block that I've had for several months now. This morning, I ended up using my allocated "before-work-business-school-app-process-time" to write the first draft of my accomplishments essay (for HBS). It came out BEAUTIFULLY and one of my co-workers (a Harvard Law alum who will also be writing one of my letters of recommendation) said it was very inspiring/heartwarming. I have you to thank for that!

That being said, full disclosure: HBS is my #1 choice. In an ideal world and assuming I got into both programs, and if I were not worried about my age, I'd love to go to Columbia's MS RED for 12 months first (May '13-May '14), work in real estate for one summer (maybe even go to Dubai or Singapore to get some intl real estate experience under my belt), then do HBS Year 1 (Aug '14-May '15), work in real estate for another summer, then finish up from Aug '15-May '16.

The fact that I've been reading all of these forums about how their class trends much younger than other peer schools like Wharton and that only 5% of their class is age 28+ really worries me though. I've even been thinking of taking the GMAT again and actually studying harder (my efforts were somewhat sporadic so I got lucky) to break 750 just to give myself even more security. When I had been consistently studying over a year ago I was scoring 770-780 in practice CAT exams.

Apps wise, I'm planning to apply to Harvard (October/R1), Columbia (R1 but it seems to be in January), Wharton (October/R1), and then I actually think I might apply to MIT R2 only because their app seems to have the most unique/challenging questions and I want to put together a quality app for Harvard and Columbia (my #1 and #2 choices). I also don't know if I would like it at MIT since I'm not a tech person.

Okay, back to work now and then home to work on my "Why business school?" essay while I'm still on a roll!

PrecisionEssay wrote:First of all I have to say that you have an extremely lucid vision of where you stand who you are and what your weaknesses and strengths are. EXTREMELY. In reading your profile I would have written about the same obstacles as you.

But here's the good news: you have a WONDERFUL profile.
And you seem to have a good handle on the writing side of things as well. USE your stories to your advantage. Transform what seems to be a weakens into a strength. You are applying late because your mom battled with cancer? LET THEM KNOW!!! You have weight problems? Come clean and attack it head on. You will have so many opportunities to tell true deep and moving stories in which you can rather impress the Adcom with your perseverance and fortitude.

The trickiest thing I think will be to give your reasoning for your career goals, because you won;t have that much space to give them the whole speil. But essentially you will have to condense your love of real estate into a quick and efficient answer.

So, I hope this motivated you, because that's what I was trying to do!

Now, all you have to do is start preparing for your applications!
:)

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by Jon@Admissionado » Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:57 am
Go to it!
You are right that the age is an obstacle. That's why you have to make sure you are in that Top 5%, and having inspirational and heartwarming essays is certainly one way to do it. And yes, hitting a 750 is another! :)
Best of luck to you. You DO have a heartwarming story, and if you need any advice help, you know where to find us
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https://admissionado.lpages.co/50-essay ... ked-vol-4/
https://admissionado.lpages.co/case-studies-lp/
https://admissionado.com/mba/reviews/
https://www.glassdoor.com/Reviews/Admis ... 700945.htm

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