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by hritik » Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:48 pm
Framed by traitorous colleagues, Alfred Dreyfus was imprisoned for twelve years before" there was exoneration and his freedom'.
(A) there was exoneration and his freedom
(B) he was to be exonerated with freedom
(C) being exonerated and freed
(D) exoneration and his freedom
(E) being freed, having been exonerated
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by cans » Sat Sep 10, 2011 11:25 pm
IMO c
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by mundasingh123 » Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:00 am
Its no use posting IMO without discussing why you thought what you thought is the answer .
Whats wrong with E
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by sl750 » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:48 am
C. Correctly describes the flow of events. He was absolved of whatever crime he committed and he was set free
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by mundasingh123 » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:35 am
The and conjunction is usually used to describe events that have no connection with one another
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by GmatKiss » Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:36 am
hritik wrote:Framed by traitorous colleagues, Alfred Dreyfus was imprisoned for twelve years before" there was exoneration and his freedom'.
(A) there was exoneration and his freedom
(B) he was to be exonerated with freedom
(C) being exonerated and freed(D) (his) exoneration and his freedom
(E) being freed, having been exonerated
IMO:C
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by mundasingh123 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 2:11 am
Whats wrong with E
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by GmatKiss » Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:37 am
mundasingh123 wrote:Whats wrong with E
Framed by traitorous colleagues, Alfred Dreyfus was imprisoned for twelve years before being freed, having been exonerated

Does it makes sense? I feel the sentence to be incomplete, lacking a conjunction.
Being and having been is not parallel!

By the way, the thank was out of mistake!
Obviously didnt meant to thank you :D

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by mundasingh123 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:45 am
GmatKiss wrote:
mundasingh123 wrote:Whats wrong with E
Framed by traitorous colleagues, Alfred Dreyfus was imprisoned for twelve years before being freed, having been exonerated

Does it makes sense? I feel the sentence to be incomplete, lacking a conjunction.
Being and having been is not parallel!

By the way, the thank was out of mistake!
Obviously didnt meant to thank you :D

Regards,
GK
keep the thank you,Dude . I dont need it to inflate my ego . Less said the better
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by mundasingh123 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:48 am
Does it makes sense? I feel the sentence to be incomplete, lacking a conjunction.
Being and having been is not parallel!
Makes sense to me when i consider it a comma + ing modifier
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by inittowinit » Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:09 am
E is also incorrect because of the timeline of events, "being freed" to "having been exonerated" is awkward. You have to be exonerated first, then freedom.
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by mundasingh123 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:16 am
inittowinit wrote:E is also incorrect because of the timeline of events, "being freed" to "having been exonerated" is awkward. You have to be exonerated first, then freedom.
so thats what having been conveys
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by inittowinit » Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:26 am
That may be true in and may "sound correct", but why choose E when C is more concise and nothing is wrong with it. On the GMAT, answers are consistently narrowed to 2-3 selections that seem correct, it's the small things such as wordiness or inconsistent timeline that set the wrong apart from the right.
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