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jawad: Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts; Posts: 32; Joined: Sun Jul 06, 2008 11:10 pm; Location: Pakistan; Thanked: 1 times

by jawad » Sat May 09, 2009 11:35 am

Hi ,

I am applying for IE Master degree application. Can you please review my ansawer to the question of improving personal characteristics and advise suggestions /comments on the reply.

6. Which of your personal characteristics would you like to improve through the program?

I want to fill the gaps in my professional knowledge about the subject. That’s why I have selected this course to focus on Area-Specific knowledge for the advancement of career. Second, I want to improve upon my personal development to assume senior management position at SCM Company. And lastly I would like to develop strong networking with peers to stay connected and continue the learning from each others experience.

regards/jawad

Jawad Shah

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by Scottie@VeritasPrep » Tue May 12, 2009 7:30 am

We do not review essays on this forum. However, the information you presented is more of an outline and hopefully not your full essay. You should plan to completely explain each of your points and link them to your future goals as appropriate.

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