MGMAT Guide #8 pg. 99 Question 15.

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MGMAT Guide #8 pg. 99 Question 15.

by OneTwoThreeFour » Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:15 pm
The exercise asks you to indicate whether or not the underlined portion of the sentence correctly modifies any word(s).

The patient's rare disease was treated using novel techniques developed at the medical school.

My question is regarding the solution:
The underlined portion is incorrect since there are no noun(s) in which "using novel techniques" modifies. According to MGMAT, one of the ways to fix it is to change the underlined portion into a prepositional phrase, as in:

The patient's rare disease was treated through the use of novel techniques developed at the medical school.

However, "through the use of..." is a prepositional phrase that serves as a noun modifier, and the main subject that it is now modifying is "rare disease". Doesn't this destroy the meaning of the sentence? The sentence is now stating "the use of novel techniques..." is somehow modifying "disease," when instead "through the use of.." should modify the way the disease was treated. Wouldn't it be better to use a verb modifier instead to modify the way the disease was treated? As in:

The patient's rare disease was treated by using novel techniques developed at the medical school.

Now the verb phrase, "by using..." correctly modifies the way the "rare disease was treated."
Anyway, please help me out here. Thanks!
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by lunarpower » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:43 am
why all the blackout? that's kind of obnoxious.

prepositional phrase modifiers are flexible; they can modify either nouns or actions. in order to determine which way the modifier is working, you need to use a combination of common sense and context.
examples:
i read the book on the table --> in this context, it's clear that the prepositional phrase modifies the noun "book".
i read the book on the table --> in this context, it's clear that the prepositional phrase modifies the action "(i) read the book".

so, in this case we have a prepositional phrase that modifies the preceding action -- and that's perfectly fine.
if there are going to be errors with prepositional-phrase modifiers, those errors are generally going to involve the placement of those modifiers -- i.e., they'll be incorrect because they are placed too far away from the intended noun/action, or because they are placed in a location that creates an ambiguous meaning. here, neither of those is happening, so this sentence is legitimate.
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by OneTwoThreeFour » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:49 am
Thanks again Ron, that was very helpful!

I was confused with this example because the chapter on modifiers strategy revealed that noun modifiers can only modify the subject in the sentence and verb modifiers can modify both the subject and the verb. I thought there were two distinct types of prepositional phrases, one for noun modifiers and one for verb modifiers. But, I guess prepositional phrases as a whole can modify both the subject and the independent clause in the sentence.


Sorry for the blackout earlier, I didn't want to spoiler any readers with my solution. I agree, too much blackout is too hard for the eyes. In the future, I will only restrict blackouts to the answer.

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