modifier - appositive or absolute phrase ??

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For the first time in the modern era, non-Hispanic Whites are officially a minority in California, which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters only a decade ago.

A. which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters only a decade ago
B. which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from a decade ago, when it was nearly three-quarters
C. and that amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from a decade ago, when they were nearly three-quarters
D. amounting to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters a decade ago
E. amounting to a little less than half the population of the state, down from what it was a decade ago by nearly three-quarters

OA:D

In this question I could easily pick the OA but I have a doubt in D. What is the antecedent of the modifier (down from what it was a decade ago by nearly three-quarters). Is this modifier an absolute phrase or an appositive ? As this modifier seem to refer to "% of california's population that is white". Just want to understand the construction of this modifier ?

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by aspirant2011 » Fri Aug 19, 2011 7:50 pm
akshayanand wrote:For the first time in the modern era, non-Hispanic Whites are officially a minority in California, which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters only a decade ago.

A. which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters only a decade ago
B. which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from a decade ago, when it was nearly three-quarters
C. and that amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from a decade ago, when they were nearly three-quarters
D. amounting to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters a decade ago
E. amounting to a little less than half the population of the state, down from what it was a decade ago by nearly three-quarters

OA:E

In this question I could easily pick the OA but I have a doubt in E. What is the antecedent of the modifier (down from what it was a decade ago by nearly three-quarters). Is this modifier an absolute phrase or an appositive ? As this modifier seem to refer to "% of california's population that is white". Just want to understand the construction of this modifier ?

Thanks
Akshay
I think it's modifying number of non Hispanic whites...........

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by crick » Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:16 pm
I will go with D here.

E cannot be the correct answer. 'it' does not have a clear antecendent.

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by akshayanand » Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:51 pm
@crick: my apologies for the typo. I just edited it to D.

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