A --> awkward construction, instead of 'huge marketing network .. with states opening'
huge seems to be modifying marketing but as per context it should modify network
it should be 'huge network for marketing'
B,C,D subject verb errors.
There are other errors as well.
GMATPrep Q5
This topic has expert replies
Source: Beat The GMAT — Sentence Correction |
-
amitabhprasad
- Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
- Posts: 259
- Joined: Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:30 pm
- Thanked: 16 times
- ronniecoleman
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 546
- Joined: Sun Nov 16, 2008 11:00 pm
- Location: New Delhi , India
- Thanked: 13 times
Small tip
Read A again and again.....you will find that..
merger of leading electric and xyg company....( meaning single company handling both electric and xyg )
This is enough to choose IMO E
Read A again and again.....you will find that..
merger of leading electric and xyg company....( meaning single company handling both electric and xyg )
This is enough to choose IMO E
Admission champion, Hauz khaz
011-27565856
011-27565856












