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by alivapriyada » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:02 am
The physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics designed for undergraduate students in a two-year course.

A. The physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics designed for undergraduate students in a two-year course.

B. For undergraduate students, the physicist Richard Feynman presented a two-year course, being a comprehensive introduction to modern physics.

C. A comprehensive introduction was in a two-year course by the physicist Richard Feynman presenting to undergraduate students an introduction to modern physics.

D. Presenting a comprehensive introduction, the physicist Richard Feynman introduced modern physics in a two-year course designed for undergraduate students.

E. In a two-year course designed for undergraduate students, the physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics.
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by karanrulz4ever » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:03 am
IMO D
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by alivapriyada » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:14 am
karanrulz4ever wrote:IMO D
nice try dear, but this is not the correct answer.
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by akhpad » Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:03 am
E is better than A.

E is the answer.

"In a two-year course designed for undergraduate students" is a modifier
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by alivapriyada » Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:08 am
akhpad wrote:E is better than A.

E is the answer.

"In a two-year course designed for undergraduate students" is a modifier
ok let other people to explain as well
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by kvcpk » Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:20 am
in A, "In a two year course" is not clear on what its modifying.
E fixes this and makes the meaning clear.

IMO E.
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by shovan85 » Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:06 pm
E for me too

The physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics designed for undergraduate students in a two-year course.

A. Introduction is to Course not to Modern Physics

B. Being seems unnecessary

C. Introduction is redundant

D. Introduce is redundant

E. OK
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by harvard_girl » Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:25 pm
A. The physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics designed for undergraduate students in a two-year course.

E. In a two-year course designed for undergraduate students, the physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics.

A or E, I think it is A.

A - X(comp. intro. to modern physics) is designed for "undergraduate students in a Y(two year course)."

E - In a Y designed for undergraduate students, the physicist RF presented X.

In E, Y and X seems like they are completly connected. X must be for Y designed for Under. studetents. Where as in A, X must be for Undergraduate students in a Y.

I really think A makes more sense.... does anyone have any suggestions?? :)
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by goyalsau » Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:44 pm
shovan85 wrote:E for me too

The physicist Richard Feynman presented a comprehensive introduction to modern physics designed for undergraduate students in a two-year course.

A. Introduction is to Course not to Modern Physics

B. Being seems unnecessary

C. Introduction is redundant

D. Introduce is redundant

E. OK
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by alivapriyada » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:57 am
well, Many thanx to you guys!!

OA is E
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