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by prac » Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:52 am
At the annualstock holders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival's mu ... g sales for the company's powerful microprocessor chip.

A. including among them the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of
E.among these the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for

can we use among them directly after comma . IS this not run on sentence?

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by maihuna » Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:18 am
Out of given choices: sales of seems right construction than sales for. With this restriction only BD qualifies, use of which in B refers to company, but it should refer to threat as per following statements. So D,
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