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by akhpad » Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:18 am
Main clause, intensifying ........

"intensifying ..." is a modifier refers to previous clause.
expectations -> signals to use "would"

expectations of X -> X should be noun or noun phrase
expectations that X would do Y -> correct


a.) that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of
->"that of" not required
->"doubled " incorrect


b.) that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double ->Correct

c.) of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled
->"doubled " incorrect
-> Comma before that makes the fragment


d.) of personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubling that of
-> incorrect as explained above

e.) of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of
-> incorrect as explained above
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by Phirozz » Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:52 am
A is the correct answer

B is wrong because of redundancy.

since expectations is used, no need to use would.
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by aspirant2010 » Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:55 am
I am with B.............
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by aspirant2010 » Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:56 am
I am with B.............
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by loveusonu » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:25 am
Should be B..
As Akhil explained, we need to have 'would' over her and out of B\E. B does correct comparison
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