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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Sat Dec 18, 2010 9:57 pm
A specialist recruitment consultancy has reported that more and more members of the UK's workforce are embracing temporary employment as a means to greater occupational flexibility and enrolling in professional training programs with hopes to increase their future earning potential.

A
to greater occupational flexibility and enrolling
B
to greater flexibility occupationally, enrolling
C
of greater occupational flexibility and enroll
D
of greater flexibility occupationally, and enrolling
E
for greater occupational flexibility and the enrollment
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by JK. » Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:34 pm
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:A specialist recruitment consultancy has reported that more and more members of the UK's workforce are embracing temporary employment as a means to greater occupational flexibility and enrolling in professional training programs with hopes to increase their future earning potential.

A
to greater occupational flexibility and enrolling
B
to greater flexibility occupationally, enrolling
C
of greater occupational flexibility and enroll
D
of greater flexibility occupationally, and enrolling
E
for greater occupational flexibility and the enrollment
IMO A
Two actions are done by the workforce (embrace and enroll) and they both can best be expressed in parallel terms. Another way to look at parallelism is that both the sides of AND need to be parallel. Eliminate C and E. Occupation(al/ally) is used as adjective here and hence need to be occupational. Eliminate B and D.
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