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Private House

by showbu » Tue Jan 13, 2009 11:20 pm
A private house in NYC is a building owned by an individual or individuals having less than eight units and no commercial space.

a. a building owned by an individual or individuals having less than eight units and no commercial space

b one that an individual or individuals own with fewer than eight units and no commercial space

c a building with fewer than eight units, no commercial space, and is owned by an individual or individuals

d. one that has fewer than eight units, no commercial space and it is owned by an individual or individuals

e. one that has fewer than eight units, is owned by an individual or individuals, and has no commercial space
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by Bidisha800 » Tue Jan 13, 2009 11:23 pm
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Re: Private House

by El Cucu » Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:57 am
showbu wrote:A private house in NYC is a building owned by an individual or individuals having less than eight units and no commercial space.

a. a building owned by an individual or individuals having less than eight units and no commercial space

b one that an individual or individuals own with fewer than eight units and no commercial space

c a building with fewer than eight units, no commercial space, and is owned by an individual or individuals

d. one that has fewer than eight units, no commercial space and it is owned by an individual or individuals

e. one that has fewer than eight units, is owned by an individual or individuals, and has no commercial space

a. a building owned by an individual or individuals having less than eight units and no commercial space (having can modifie individuals)

b one that an individual or individuals own with fewer than eight units and no commercial space (with fewer than eight units is far from house and can refer to individuals)

c a building with fewer than eight units, no commercial space, and is owned by an individual or individuals (noun phrase + noun phrase + verb phrase, is not parallel)

d. one that has fewer than eight units, no commercial space and it is owned by an individual or individuals (verb phrase+noun phrase+verb phrase) (it refers to what?)

e. one that has fewer than eight units, is owned by an individual or individuals, and has no commercial space (verb prhase+verb phrase+verb phrase) OK.

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by welcome » Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:17 am
A - less than is problem with countable noun.
B - concluded meaning is misleading, individuals with eight units or building?
C - Not parallal, with fewer...., is not parallal to no commercial space(Should have with)
D - Not parallal, has fewer...., is not parallal to no commercial space(Should have has )
E- Correct construction.
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