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by vikram_k51 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:45 am
644. Since 1975 the number of women in upper-level management in American corporations have increased by 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still lag behind those of their male counterparts.
(A) have increased by 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still lag
(B) has increased by 25 percent, however much their salaries lag
(C) have increased 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still have lagged
(D) has increased by 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still lag
(E) have increased 25 percent; their salaries, however, still lag
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Re: Female Executives

by ketkoag » Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:55 am
vikram_k51 wrote:644. Since 1975 the number of women in upper-level management in American corporations have increased by 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still lag behind those of their male counterparts.
(A) have increased by 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still lag
(B) has increased by 25 percent, however much their salaries lag
(C) have increased 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still have lagged
(D) has increased by 25 percent; female executives' salaries, however, still lag
(E) have increased 25 percent; their salaries, however, still lag
IMO D coz "the number" needs a singular verb..and however can not be used as a conjunction as used in B.. semicolon is requeired here.. D is best..
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by riteshbindal » Wed Aug 19, 2009 8:49 am
B IMO.
I think that semicolon is not required because we are bringing "however" to show a contrast to the situation. If we need to show the contrast, we should use a comma.
Please post the OA.
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by capnx » Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:02 am
In B, however can't be used to join clauses; should use "but" instead. and I think B is also missing much "of" their salaries...?
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by pandeyvineet24 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:14 am
Between B and D, although B resolves S-V, use of "their" is incorrect in the sentence.

the answer should be D.
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by pradeepsarathy » Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:41 pm
IMO D -

'the number......has' is the correct usage

A,C and E are out.

between B and D -

B has awkward construction - '.....however much their salaries lag' - Hence incorrect

D - correctly uses two clauses seperated by a semicolon.
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by arorag » Wed Aug 19, 2009 4:53 pm
I Think D...
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by mehravikas » Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:48 pm
IMO - D
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by vikram_k51 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:50 pm
OA is D.
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