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by gmatmachoman » Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:03 pm
Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they
began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked
moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of
red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

(A) they began to grow again after the 1991 report
that linked moderate consumption of alcohol,
and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk
of heart disease
(B) after the 1991 report that linked a reduced
risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol
consumption, particularly red wine, they began
growing again

(C) in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption,
and particularly of red wine, which was linked
with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused
them to begin to grow again

(D) with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in
a 1991 report with moderate alcohol
consumption, in particular red wine, they
began growing again

(E) a reduced risk of heart disease linked to
moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991
report, and in particular red wine, started them
growing again

OA : A
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by mmslf75 » Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:47 pm
gmatmachoman wrote:Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they
began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked
moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of
red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

(A) they began to grow again after the 1991 report
that linked moderate consumption of alcohol,
and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk
of heart disease
(B) after the 1991 report that linked a reduced
risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol
consumption, particularly red wine, they began
growing again

(C) in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption,
and particularly of red wine, which was linked
with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused
them to begin to grow again

(D) with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in
a 1991 report with moderate alcohol
consumption, in particular red wine, they
began growing again

(E) a reduced risk of heart disease linked to
moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991
report, and in particular red wine, started them
growing again

OA : A
this is from OG 12 i guess

read on

moderate consumption of alcohol,
and particularly of red wine, in option A does the trick ;-)
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by gmatmachoman » Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:52 pm
Ashish

How about the placement of "Pronoun"(they) nearer to the antecedent(Sales).?

In other options,the gap is more compared t that of [spoiler]A?[/spoiler]
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by komal » Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:19 am
gmatmachoman wrote:Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

(A) they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease - Correct (they refers correctly to sales of wines)

(B) after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again - Awkward

(C) in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again - Parallelism Error

(D) with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again - Awkward

(E) a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again - Awkward

OA : A
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