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Visitors to the park

by anksm22 » Thu Jun 25, 2015 9:03 am
Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang like socks on
a clothesline.

(A) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang
(B) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs were hanging
(C) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging
(D) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging
(E) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs have hung


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by GMATGuruNY » Fri Jun 26, 2015 6:48 pm
anksm22 wrote:Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang like socks on
a clothesline.

(A) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang
(B) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs were hanging
(C) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging
(D) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging
(E) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs have hung
Generally, verbs should be in the SAME TENSE unless a change in tense is required.
A, B and C: Visitors...have often looked up...and saw...
Here, there is no reason to switch from the present perfect tense (have looked) to the past tense (saw).
Eliminate A, B and C.

In E, whose seems to refer to branches, implying that BRANCHES have ARMS AND LEGS.
This meaning is nonsensical.
Eliminate E.

The correct answer is D.

Generally, COMMA + with at the end of a sentence is an ADVERB serving to modify the nearest preceding action.
OA: Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline.
Here, the modifier in red is an adverb serving to modify sleeping (the nearest preceding action).
HOW are the monkeys sleeping?
They are sleeping WITH ARMS AND LEGS HANGING LIKE SOCKS ON A CLOTHESLINE.
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by anksm22 » Sat Jun 27, 2015 3:14 am
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by rsarashi » Sun Aug 13, 2017 6:58 am
Generally, verbs should be in the SAME TENSE unless a change in tense is required.
A, B and C: Visitors...have often looked up...and saw...
Here, there is no reason to switch from the present perfect tense (have looked) to the past tense (saw).
Eliminate A, B and C.

In E, whose seems to refer to branches, implying that BRANCHES have ARMS AND LEGS.
This meaning is nonsensical.
Eliminate E.

The correct answer is D.

Generally, COMMA + with at the end of a sentence is an ADVERB serving to modify the nearest preceding action.
OA: Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline.
Here, the modifier in red is an adverb serving to modify sleeping (the nearest preceding action).
HOW are the monkeys sleeping?
They are sleeping WITH ARMS AND LEGS HANGING LIKE SOCKS ON A CLOTHESLINE.
Hi GMATGuruNY ,

Just a quick question.

Is the usage of HAVE is correct in E?

Please explain.

Thanks.
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