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SC -Census Bureau

by agemroy » Tue Jul 08, 2008 10:26 pm
A March 2000 Census Bureau survey showed that Mexico accounted for more than a quarter of all foreign-born residents of the United States the largest share for any country to contribute since 1890, when about 30 percent of the country’s foreign-born population was from Germany.
1. the largest share for any country to contribute
2. the largest share that any country has contributed
3. which makes it the largest share for any country to contribute
4. having the largest share to be contributed by any country
5. having the largest share to have been contributed by any country

OA is A
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by reachac » Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:11 am
I cant decide between A/B...

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by kiranlegend » Wed Jul 09, 2008 3:56 am
since 1890.. so i'd pick B because it has 'has'. But it seems to be wrong, can any one pls explian?

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by arorag » Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:40 pm
I read somewhere that if a definite time is present we never use past perfect tense

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by rs2010 » Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:38 pm
By selecting B,has contributed, we are making sentence present perfect.
Presently it is in past tense with choice A

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by kiranlegend » Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:31 pm
still i'm kinda confused about this question.. alright with A the sentence stays in present tense.. but due to the presence of since 1890, i thought 'has been' needs to be there.. any cogent explanations, pls? :)

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by ildude02 » Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:49 am
I will go with D because there is "since", the action should be continuing. Atleast that's my take. What's the answer please?

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by Vignesh.4384 » Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:09 pm
hello,

I am just curious about this question.
should there be any conjunction or a comma between"A March 2000 Census Bureau survey showed that Mexico accounted for more than a quarter of all foreign-born residents of the United States " and "the largest share for any country to contribute since 1890," ??

Can anyone explain this ?

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Re: SC -Census Bureau

by perfectstranger » Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:44 am
agemroy wrote:A March 2000 Census Bureau survey showed that Mexico accounted for more than a quarter of all foreign-born residents of the United States the largest share for any country to contribute since 1890, when about 30 percent of the country’s foreign-born population was from Germany.
1. the largest share for any country to contribute
2. the largest share that any country has contributed
3. which makes it the largest share for any country to contribute
4. having the largest share to be contributed by any country
5. having the largest share to have been contributed by any country

OA is A
Could anyone has an explanation with that one ? I have choosed B
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by jainrahul1985 » Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:40 am
Is the answer A/B .

I chose A because "has contributed since 1890" means its still in process but the statement says survey was done in 2000 .

Please correct me if wrong .

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by GMATGuruNY » Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:43 am
agemroy wrote:A March 2000 Census Bureau survey showed that Mexico accounted for more than a quarter of all foreign-born residents of the United States, the largest share for any country to contribute since 1890, when about 30 percent of the country's foreign-born population was from Germany.

A. the largest share for any country to contribute
B. the largest share that any country has contributed
C. which makes it the largest share for any country to contribute
D. having the largest share to be contributed by any country
E. having the largest share to have been contributed by any country
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In the original SC, a comma appears before the underlined portion.
I've corrected the omission in my post here.

In C, which incorrectly refers to the United States. Eliminate C.

In D and E, any country since 1890 implies -- incorrectly -- that the sentence is discussing countries that have come into existence since 1890. The intended meaning of the sentence is to discuss how the different countries have contributed since 1890. Eliminate D and E.

In A, to contribute since 1890 makes no sense. Since requires the present perfect tense. Eliminate A.

The correct answer is B.
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by sachindia » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:40 am
GMATGuruNY wrote:
agemroy wrote:A March 2000 Census Bureau survey showed that Mexico accounted for more than a quarter of all foreign-born residents of the United States the largest share for any country to contribute since 1890, when about 30 percent of the country�s foreign-born population was from Germany.
1. the largest share for any country to contribute
2. the largest share that any country has contributed
3. which makes it the largest share for any country to contribute
4. having the largest share to be contributed by any country
5. having the largest share to have been contributed by any country

OA is A
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In C, which incorrectly refers to the United States. Eliminate C.

In D and E, any country since 1890 implies -- incorrectly -- that the sentence is discussing countries that have come into existence since 1890. The intended meaning of the sentence is to discuss how the different countries have contributed since 1890. Eliminate D and E.

In A, to contribute since 1890 makes no sense. Since requires the present perfect tense. Eliminate A.

The correct answer is B.

If the OA is A, ignore this question.
Hi Mitch,
The right answer 'the largest share that any country has contributed' makes it to be placed beside United States.

Though it is the best of answer choices here, doesn't it represent an example of misplaced modifier?
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by GMATGuruNY » Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:01 am
sachindia wrote:
Hi Mitch,
The right answer 'the largest share that any country has contributed' makes it to be placed beside United States.

Though it is the best of answer choices here, doesn't it represent an example of misplaced modifier?
In the original SC, a comma appears before the underlined portion.
This comma was inadvertently omitted by the OP.
I've corrected the omission in my post above.

In the OA, the largest share is in APPOSITION to more than a quarter, the preceding noun phrase.
Two nouns (or noun phrases) are in apposition when they appear side by side, with the second serving to explain or define the first.
The implication here is that MORE THAN A QUARTER is THE LARGEST SHARE that any country has contributed.
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by sachindia » Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:22 am
Thanks Mitch.

Is it an absolute phrase?
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by GMATGuruNY » Thu Jan 17, 2013 2:15 pm
sachindia wrote:Thanks Mitch.

Is it an absolute phrase?
There is a distinction.

An APPOSITIVE serves to explain or define the preceding NOUN:
Mary waved to Mr. Smith, her favorite teacher in the whole school.
Here, the appositive her favorite teacher serves to define Mr. Smith, the preceding noun.

An ABSOLUTE PHRASE serves as an adverb, providing context for the entire preceding CLAUSE:
Mary entered the room, her eyes shining brightly.
Here, the absolute phrase her eyes shining brightly does not refer solely to the preceding noun.
Rather, it modifies the entire preceding clause, explaining HOW Mary entered the room.
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