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by AJWILL » Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:40 am
Q)7. Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.
[A] films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills
in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills
[C] coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West
[D] films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
[E] films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills

OA A

[spoiler]No problem there.. i have a different Question!!
keeping option A intact if there was ANOTHER OPTION which read
films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills
THEN, which one will we choose?[/spoiler]
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by kartikshah » Tue Jul 24, 2012 6:55 am
A would still be a better choice.

Depict..as is correct usage.
Depict as if they is incorrect.
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by mv12 » Tue Jul 24, 2012 8:26 am
I would like to go with A.

Also Depict and as if...both have the same intentions..so in your case..as if is redundant..so not a valid answer.
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