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by thephoenix » Thu May 06, 2010 11:00 pm
No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items, travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees.(A) travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees
(B) travelers often treat customs inspectors as wanton poachers instead of government employees
(C) travelers often treat customs inspectors as if they were not government employees but wanton poachers
(D) customs inspectors are often treated by travelers as if they were wanton poachers rather than government employees
(E) customs inspectors are often treated not like government employees but wanton poachers by travelers
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by iamseer » Thu May 06, 2010 11:27 pm
A,B,C are out b'cos of misplaced modifier

Now, got to see from D and E which one is worse.

D has no grammatical errors but is wordy

E uses construction "not like X but Y" .which is incorrect. It should have been "Not like X but like Y". Also, the placement of "by travelers" is ambiguous.

IMO D
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by ansh.kumar » Fri May 07, 2010 1:35 am
its "d" as expained by iamseer
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