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by 2010gmat » Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:20 am

Since the last election, the lobbying effort initiated by environmental organizations, homeowners, and small business
owners have increased awareness of pending environmental legislation.
"¢ have increased awareness of pending environmental legislation
"¢ have increased awareness about pending legislation dealing with the environment
"¢ has increased awareness about pending environmental legislation
"¢ has increased awareness of pending environmental legislation
"¢ has increased awareness of environmental legislation that is still pending

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by brick2009 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:33 am

D:

Lobbying effort-- singular -- HAS

awareness about is incorrect

awareness of -- correct form

E: is wordy

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