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by bpgen » Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:13 pm
In addition to curbing health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment, cut greenhouse gas emissions and recover a wide range of valuable metals including silver, gold, palladium, copper and indium," said Achim Steiner, executive director of UNEP, in a prepared statement.


A. health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment, cut greenhouse gas emissions

B. health problems that boosts developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential for generating decent employment, cutting greenhouse gas emissions

C. health problems, boosted developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment, cut greenhouse gas emissions

D. health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential for generating decent employment, cutting greenhouse gas emissions

E. health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment and cut greenhouse gas emissions


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by sogmat » Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:37 pm
I think its A
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by Phirozz » Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:58 pm
bpgen wrote:In addition to curbing health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment, cut greenhouse gas emissions and recover a wide range of valuable metals including silver, gold, palladium, copper and indium," said Achim Steiner, executive director of UNEP, in a prepared statement.


A. health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment, cut greenhouse gas emissions

B. health problems that boosts developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential for generating decent employment, cutting greenhouse gas emissions

C. health problems, boosted developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment, cut greenhouse gas emissions

D. health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential for generating decent employment, cutting greenhouse gas emissions

E. health problems, boosting developing country e-waste recycling rates can have the potential to generate decent employment and cut greenhouse gas emissions


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IMO A maintains paralleism
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by madsadman » Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:58 pm
I have come down to 'A' and 'C'

I think 'A' is better than 'C'.

In 'A', the subject is 'boosting' while in 'C', the subject is 'rates'.
Rates cannot have the impact but the 'boosting' can have.

So I am going with 'A'.
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by bpgen » Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:17 pm
Thanks all, OA is A

It's all about parallelism:

curbing =>boosting

generate => cut => recover
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