All across Detroit

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All across Detroit

by james » Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:28 pm
All across Detroit, whitewashed fences, new roofs, and freshly painted porches are signs of a brisk urban renewal led by new immigrants, one clapboard house at a time.

A: renewal led by new immigrants, one clapboard house at a time
B: renewal led by new immigrants, with one clapboard house at a time
C: renewal that has been led by new immigrants, with one clapboard house at a time
D: renewal, which had been led by new immigrants, one clapboard house at a time
E: renewal, which has been led by new immigrants and one clapboard house at a time

I easily fall prey of this type of constructions: one with some sort of modifiers at the end
Pls can someone explain how to avoid pitfalls on Q's with prepositional, adjectival, or noun
modifiers at the end. Good examples would be much helpful.

OA is [spoiler]A
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Thanks as I look forward to your help[/spoiler]
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