Opening phrase doesnt modify the subject of the next clause

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by VivianKerr » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:50 am
Dependent clauses can serve many functions.

The introductory modifying phrase is only required to modify the noun/pronoun directly after the comma if it begins with a participle. That is a common Modification error on the GMAT.

CORRECT: "Skipping down the street, the girl felt happy."

In your example, "part" of the argument is describing the receipt of the sentence. We can flip the clauses, and the sentence would still make sense.

He received severance as part of the arrangement.
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by mundasingh123 » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:57 am
VivianKerr wrote:Dependent clauses can serve many functions.

The introductory modifying phrase is only required to modify the noun/pronoun directly after the comma if it begins with a participle. That is a common Modification error on the GMAT.

CORRECT: "Skipping down the street, the girl felt happy."

In your example, "part" of the argument is describing the receipt of the sentence. We can flip the clauses, and the sentence would still make sense.

He received severance as part of the arrangement.
hi vivian thanks for the help .
but the following sentence is also considered correct .
although he remembered to buy the milk, john forgot what type the butter should be .
This corresponds to the structute
although/when/because ..., subject ...

Aware of the danger,he fled .
is another correct sentence
is flipping the sentence a technique that we can rely upon at all times .
what about the sentences which have misplaced modifiers . we could always flip them to make the sentence correct
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by VivianKerr » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:10 am
"Aware of the danger, he fled." is correct.

"He fled, aware of the danger." is correct, too.

Flipping the sentence is not any kind of technique, really, but I just want to make sure you aren't taking a specific GMAT Modification error and applying it to all dependent clauses.

Let's look at a GMAT-like error:

INCORRECT: Inheriting the business, the investments were rearranged by the new CEO.

This is a modification error because the "CEO" is logically the one "inheriting. (It's also in Passive Voice.)

CORRECT: Inheriting the business, the new CEO rearranged the investments.

If we merely flipped the clauses, the sentence would still be incorrect.

INCORRECT: The investments were rearranged by the new CEO, inheriting the business.

It's awkward, and it's in passive voice.
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by mundasingh123 » Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:17 am
Hi Vivian , Arent you being inconsistent with the way you are flipping .
As part of the arrangement ,he received severance
you flipped it and it became
he received severance As part of the arrangement .
NO comma

But when you flipped
"Aware of the danger, he fled." is correct.

"He fled, aware of the danger." is correct, too.
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by VivianKerr » Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:23 am
Correct, no comma is needed to precede the word "as".

Again, "flipping" is not a strategy; there is no need for "consistency" in flipping.

I think you're overthinking this. Focus on the PURPOSE of a dependent clause. It doesn't always intend to modify the pronoun/noun that comes first; when that type of error is tested, it's usually with an introductory participle.
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by mundasingh123 » Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:26 am
VivianKerr wrote:Correct, no comma is needed to precede the word "as".

Again, "flipping" is not a strategy; there is no need for "consistency" in flipping.

I think you're overthinking this. Focus on the PURPOSE of a dependent clause. It doesn't always intend to modify the pronoun/noun that comes first; when that type of error is tested, it's usually with an introductory participle.
Thanks so much Vivian for the help
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