In 1962, Rachel Carson's book Silent Spring

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In 1962, Rachel Carson's book Silent Spring started a wave of social activism resulting in the regulation of several chemical pesticides and herbicides to become international law.

A. started a wave of social activism resulting in
B. sparked a social-activism wave that caused
C. initiated a wave of social activism in which
D. caused a wave of social activism that initiated
E. began a wave of social activism that caused
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by patanjali.purpose » Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:22 pm
tinashine20 wrote:In 1962, Rachel Carson's book Silent Spring started a wave of social activism resulting in the regulation of several chemical pesticides and herbicides to become international law.

A. started a wave of social activism resulting in
B. sparked a social-activism wave that caused
C. initiated a wave of social activism in which
D. caused a wave of social activism that initiated
E. began a wave of social activism that caused
Its important to understand meaning here: WAVE RESULTED IN THE REGULATION
B - Wave CAUSED (RESULTED is better); SOCIAL-ACTIVISM WAVE is less preferable to WAVE OF SOCIAL-ACTIVISM
C-use of WHICH is inappropriate (loses significance of RESULTING)
D- distorts meaning (book CAUSED and WAVE INITIATED); WAVE resulted NOT INITIATED; Book initiated NOT CAUSED
E - Wave CAUSED (RESULTED is better)

A

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