My Profile:
Personal Background
Age – 27, Male, Chinese
Educational Background[/b]
GPA 3.86, Bachelor degree, Major in Computer science and information management from top university in Taiwan
GMAT
710 (92%)
Q50 (94%)
V38 (83%)
AWA 3.5
Toefl
IBT 100
Work Experience
3yrs in the global IT company (one of IBM/HP/Cisco...)
Responsible for project engagement and new offering development and maketing.
1.5 yrs in marine corps as database administrator and programmer.
Extra-curricular
1. As a band manager and bass guitarist,
I was awarded the best bass guitarist in national band competition.
And my band was awarded the best band in that band competition.
2. Won a business plan competition with an internet business.
3. Excellence Award from Microsoft Software Competition
I just got a rejection letter from Haas and Kellogg and planned to apply for 2010 MBA program of Kellogg, Haas, Stern, Dartmouth, Anderson.
My Questions:
1. Do you think this profile is competitive for the aforementioned top schools?
2. What else I can do to improve my candidacy?
3. Should I improve my standardized test score or focus on essays improvement?
Thanks for your time and I would be thankful if you could answer my queries.
Personal Background
Age – 27, Male, Chinese
Educational Background[/b]
GPA 3.86, Bachelor degree, Major in Computer science and information management from top university in Taiwan
GMAT
710 (92%)
Q50 (94%)
V38 (83%)
AWA 3.5
Toefl
IBT 100
Work Experience
3yrs in the global IT company (one of IBM/HP/Cisco...)
Responsible for project engagement and new offering development and maketing.
1.5 yrs in marine corps as database administrator and programmer.
Extra-curricular
1. As a band manager and bass guitarist,
I was awarded the best bass guitarist in national band competition.
And my band was awarded the best band in that band competition.
2. Won a business plan competition with an internet business.
3. Excellence Award from Microsoft Software Competition
I just got a rejection letter from Haas and Kellogg and planned to apply for 2010 MBA program of Kellogg, Haas, Stern, Dartmouth, Anderson.
My Questions:
1. Do you think this profile is competitive for the aforementioned top schools?
2. What else I can do to improve my candidacy?
3. Should I improve my standardized test score or focus on essays improvement?
Thanks for your time and I would be thankful if you could answer my queries.












