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by sunnyjohn » Wed Nov 25, 2009 1:14 am
Whereas the use of synthetic fertilizers has greatly expanded agricultural productivity in many parts of the world, an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers may accelerate soil structure deterioration and soil erosion.

A. an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
B. an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, and if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, it
C. if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they
D. the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution
E. the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, while their substitution for more traditional fertilizers

OA after some discussion.
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by raghavakumar85 » Wed Nov 25, 2009 1:40 am
sunnyjohn wrote:Whereas the use of synthetic fertilizers has greatly expanded agricultural productivity in many parts of the world, an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers may accelerate soil structure deterioration and soil erosion.

A. an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
B. an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, and if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, it
C. if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they
D. the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution
E. the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, while their substitution for more traditional fertilizers

OA after some discussion.
IMO A

Eliminated B and C at the first look.

D looked good but has a modifier problem at the end (this substitution)
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by tanviet » Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:02 am
check grammar

d is wrong. "while" is wrong

check meaning

"like" is wrong. logic require "such as". B and E is out.

I do not know why C is wrong. but I think C use many conjuction. IMO A

pls, help, why C is wrong
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by nageswarkv » Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:41 am
C. if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they

this statement has two if's which is awkward and also wordy. hence C is out.
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by gmatv09 » Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:48 am
C looks to be an interesting choice...

Is this for the form :
... if x y and if x y ...

... if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they ...

"they" might refer to traditional fertilizers
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by OGMATTERS » Wed Nov 25, 2009 7:55 am
sunnyjohn wrote:Whereas the use of synthetic fertilizers has greatly expanded agricultural productivity in many parts of the world, an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers may accelerate soil structure deterioration and soil erosion.

A. an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
B. an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, and if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, it
C. if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they
D. the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution
E. the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, while their substitution for more traditional fertilizers

OA after some discussion.
[spoiler]A

C[/spoiler] changes the meaning of the sentence slightly by making it conditional.
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by sunnyjohn » Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:10 pm
OA : A
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by brick2009 » Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:32 pm
Why is E wrong!!

C is wrong because..IF..then.. is the correct construction in GMAT??

Why is E wrong..plzzzz
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