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by showbu » Fri Jan 16, 2009 8:12 pm
Although Mary Ann is not a great scholar, neither has she published any books, she has and always will be a great teacher and well-loved by her students.

a. scholar, neither has she published any books, she has and always will be

b scholar, nor having published any books, she has been and always will be

c. scholar and she hasn't published any books, she has been and always will be

d. scholar nor published any books, still she has been and always will be

e scholar nor has she published any books, but she has been and always will be

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by raunekk » Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:16 pm
imo:C

a. scholar, neither has she published any books, she has and always will be

b scholar, nor having published any books, she has been and always will be

c. scholar and she hasn't published any books, she has been and always will be

d. scholar nor published any books, still she has been and always will be

e scholar nor has she published any books, but she has been and always will be

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by Bidisha800 » Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:20 pm
C !
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by showbu » Sat Jan 17, 2009 3:02 pm
Could you explain B please?
raunekk wrote:imo:C

a. scholar, neither has she published any books, she has and always will be

b scholar, nor having published any books, she has been and always will be

c. scholar and she hasn't published any books, she has been and always will be

d. scholar nor published any books, still she has been and always will be

e scholar nor has she published any books, but she has been and always will be

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by iamcste » Sat Jan 17, 2009 3:10 pm
raunekk wrote: e scholar nor has she published any books, but she has been and always will be

whats the issue with "nor" here?

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by iamcste » Sat Jan 17, 2009 3:12 pm
Showbu

May I kindly ask the source of this question

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by iamcste » Sat Jan 17, 2009 3:20 pm
showbu wrote:Could you explain B please?
having is incorrect

also..when you set a piece of information in a pair of commas..you treat that information as non-essential

This means "Not having published any books" is made non-essential

if you remove this part and see the sentence, sentence hardly makes impact

Although X didnot work hard, nor did he join coaching, he scored 700+

here..without "nor did he join coaching" sentence hardly makes desired impact

Correct version would be

Although X didnot work hard and didnot join coaching, he score 700+

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by showbu » Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:01 pm
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iamcste wrote:Showbu

May I kindly ask the source of this question

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by raunekk » Sat Jan 17, 2009 9:20 pm
whats the issue with "nor" here?
imo,
its not parallel!!!

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