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by gmatnmein2010 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:32 pm
). Some patients who do not respond therapies of depression may simply have received inadequate treatment, having, for example been prescribed a drug as a dosage too low to be effective or having been taken off a drug too soon.

A -- having, for example been prescribed a drug as a dosage too low to be effective or having been
B -- having, for example, a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
C -- as, for example, having too low of a dosage of prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
D -- when they have, for example, been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
E -- for example, when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been
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by money9111 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:36 pm
i'm going to say D, but nothing stuck out to me too much...
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by sars72 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:39 pm
A - looks ok, parallelism is maintained
B - being is wrong. Eliminated
C - being is wrong. Eliminated
D - when is only used for time frames. usage here is wrong. Eliminated!
E - when is only used for time frames. usage here is wrong. Eliminated!

--> A is the correct answer
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by money9111 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:40 pm
so for ever time that I see when... i should know that it can ONLY be used with reference to time frames?
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by sars72 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:58 pm
money9111 wrote:so for ever time that I see when... i should know that it can ONLY be used with reference to time frames?
exactemento! :D
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by thephoenix » Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:31 pm
A -- having, for example been prescribed a drug as a dosage too low to be effective or having been
...PARALLEL AND PARTICIPLE PHRASE CONTUNING THE COMMA..CORRECT

B -- having, for example, a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
BEING is ICORRRECT.

C -- as, for example, having too low of a dosage of prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
SENTENCE CANNOT START WITH AS AFTER COMMA

D -- when they have, for example, been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
IMO were is incorrect here

E -- for example, when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been
not llel
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by money9111 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:42 am
haha thanks sars72 that's easy to remember. When are you taking the exam?
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by tomada » Tue Feb 16, 2010 1:27 pm
I guess my eyes are playing tricks on me, but it seems like the word "to" should appear between "respond" and therapies". Also, in the phrase "as a dosage too low...", shouldn't the first word be "at" ?
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by vineetbatra » Tue Feb 16, 2010 3:11 pm
sars72 wrote: E - when is only used for time frames. usage here is wrong. Eliminated!

--> A is the correct answer
Sars, I read in the MGMAT SC Guide that when can modify noun, event or time. Are you 100% sure that when can be used only for time?

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by [email protected] » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:50 pm
Final solution at one place:

Important: The purpose of this post (and all the other posts by me) is to give a complete solution to all GMAT-Prep Verbal questions at one place. Sometimes students have to wade through dozens of posts to get to the final answer. My posts will give one complete and crisp solution required to arrive at the correct answer by eliminating the wrong ones. Some of the content in these posts may have been taken from various other sources (discussion forums).

Some patients who do not respond to therapies for depression may simply have received inadequate treatment, having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been taken off a drug too soon.
(A) having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been
(B) having, for example, a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
(C) as, for example, having too low of a dosage of a prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
(D) when they have, for example, been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
(E) for example, when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been

The best way to attack this problem is to remove 'for example' from each of the choices.

A. having been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been
B. having a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
C. as having too low of a dosage of a prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
D. when they have been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
E. when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been

A is parallel 'having been || having been' ... the connector word is 'or' ... as we are joining two similar ideas (and only two ideas), we should not use a comma. This alone is sufficient to eliminate B, C, D, and E.

In B, 'having a drug prescription (refers to patients) can't be parallel to being taken off (refers to a doctor, possibly) ... as the subjects are different, the two are not parallel.

In C, 'having too low of a dosage (refers to patients) can't be parallel to being taken off (refers to a doctor, possibly) ... as the subjects are different, the two words are not parallel.

D is not parallel ('have been' is not parallel to 'were')

E is not parallel ('have a prescription' is not parallel to 'been taken off')

Correct: A
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