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by anubhavgulati » Tue Oct 11, 2011 8:04 am
Hi,

The scientists noted that rats suffering from the rare degenerative disease had begun to die six months earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then.
(A) earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then
(B) earlier, but they were not showing no signs of the disease then
(C) earlier, no outward signs of the disease had been shown in them, however
(D) earlier without any signs of the disease shown then
(E) earlier, even though no signs of it were seen in them at that time

Can someone please check. Thanks.
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by GmatKiss » Tue Oct 11, 2011 8:36 am
IMO: A
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by GmatKiss » Tue Oct 11, 2011 8:38 am
anubhavgulati wrote:Hi,

The scientists noted that rats suffering from the rare degenerative disease had begun to die six months earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then.
(A) earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then
(B) earlier, but they were not showing no signs of the disease then
(C) earlier, no outward signs of the disease had been shown in them, however
(D) earlier without any signs of the disease shown then - RUN ON
(E) earlier, even though no signs of it were seen in them at that time - seems passive

Can someone please check. Thanks.
IMO:A
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by Neo Anderson » Tue Oct 11, 2011 8:43 am
I Agree! 'A' should be the answer.
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by anubhavgulati » Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:16 am
Hi,

Can you please explain why choice A is correct.Thanks.
GmatKiss wrote:
anubhavgulati wrote:Hi,

The scientists noted that rats suffering from the rare degenerative disease had begun to die six months earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then.
(A) earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then
(B) earlier, but they were not showing no signs of the disease then
(C) earlier, no outward signs of the disease had been shown in them, however
(D) earlier without any signs of the disease shown then - RUN ON
(E) earlier, even though no signs of it were seen in them at that time - seems passive

Can someone please check. Thanks.
IMO:A
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by GmatKiss » Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:20 am
anubhavgulati wrote:Hi,

Can you please explain why choice A is correct.Thanks.
GmatKiss wrote:
anubhavgulati wrote:Hi,

The scientists noted that rats suffering from the rare degenerative disease had begun to die six months earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then.
(A) earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then
(B) earlier, but they were not showing no signs of the disease then - awkward
(C) earlier, no outward signs of the disease had been shown in them, however - awkward
(D) earlier without any signs of the disease shown then - RUN ON
(E) earlier, even though no signs of it were seen in them at that time - seems passive

Can someone please check. Thanks.
IMO:A
I chose A by Elimination method, highlighted in blue!
Hope it helps.

Regards,
GK
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by anubhavgulati » Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:30 pm
Ok, In Answer choice A, both the independent clauses using 'had'. (past perfect tense) ? Is this correct?
GmatKiss wrote:
anubhavgulati wrote:Hi,

Can you please explain why choice A is correct.Thanks.
GmatKiss wrote:
anubhavgulati wrote:Hi,

The scientists noted that rats suffering from the rare degenerative disease had begun to die six months earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then.
(A) earlier, even though they had shown no signs of the disease then
(B) earlier, but they were not showing no signs of the disease then - awkward
(C) earlier, no outward signs of the disease had been shown in them, however - awkward
(D) earlier without any signs of the disease shown then - RUN ON
(E) earlier, even though no signs of it were seen in them at that time - seems passive

Can someone please check. Thanks.
IMO:A
I chose A by Elimination method, highlighted in blue!
Hope it helps.

Regards,
GK
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by mehrasa » Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:15 pm
it should be A
@ anubhavgulati
ya, this is correct.. according to the sentence, first the symptoms of disease need to show up ( past perfect) then the rats begin to die (simple past).. but in the correct portion of sentence we can see that :had begun to die" has been used, then the second verb also need to follow the pattern without any bad effect on the intent of the sentence.
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by saketk » Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:01 am
IMO A.

Also you can check expert's comments on this question..

https://www.beatthegmat.com/aristotle-sc ... 92316.html
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