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Profile Evaluation - High GPA

by psal » Tue Feb 04, 2014 10:50 pm
Would love to get thoughts on my chances at the top 3 programs. I understand that my verbal score is light, but I'm hoping that my high GPA, work experience, and other accomplishments can overcome that and make me a competitive candidate. Also, any suggestions on what I can do to be more competitive outside of the GMAT would be appreciated!

Profile Evaluation:

Target: Top 3 (Stanford, Harvard, Wharton)

Application Plan: First round, October 2014

Background: Caucasian male, 25

Education:
- GPA: 3.95 (Highest Honors)
- Major: BS, UC Berkeley, Haas School of Business, 2010
- Additional Achievements: Engineering Entrepreneurship Sequence Certificate, 2010 Haas Undergraduate Achievement Award, Dean's List, Received A+ in a number of courses including Intro to Business (highly competitive class), Statistics, Finance, Game Theory, two other electives. Lowest letter grade was B+.

GMAT: 680 (Q49, V34, IR7, AWA TBD)

Experience:
- 2 years investment banking analyst at boutique investment bank (2010-2012). Worked on 14 transactions in very lean deal teams. Solely published 48 editions of Internet newsletter that was distributed to over 3,000 industry and VC professionals. Initiated firm's on campus recruiting efforts that did not previously exist (recruiting was done via referrals only). Offered promotion to associate role after second year (offered to select analysts after third year). Turned offer down to join top-tier late-stage venture capital firm.
- 1.5 years venture capital associate at top-tier late stage firm (2012-Present). Have worked on 6 different transactions during my time at the firm. Five months into the role, sourced investment in mobile gaming company. Investment was the 2nd largest in the firm's 34 year history. Five months after investment, majority of company was acquired at valuation 4x higher than our investment (one of the top returns for the firm). Received additional bonus for performance after second year and was assured third year promotion early. Will have 2.5 years of experience in this role when I apply.

Extracurriculars / Leadership:
- 1 year on board of non-profit that provides soccer and literacy after-school programs to under-resourced public school communities. Currently co-chair of a large fundraiser (corporate soccer tournament). Help with new team recruitment and manage team of 8 staff / board members. Looking to raise over $200K through this event.
- Held a number of leadership positions at UC Berkeley. VP and Alumni chair of fraternity. Senior Research Assistant for MBA professor (promoted after just one year). 2 years as mentor for youth entrepreneurs from local high schools.

Recommendations
- Planning to receive recommendations from two Partners at my current firm. I expect them to be strong given the feedback I received recently as part of my annual reviews.

Other:
- Hearing loss in left ear that has been getting worse each year since I was born. While my hearing impairment has made life difficult at times, I haven't let it get in the way of my career goals.
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by CriticalSquareMBA » Wed Feb 05, 2014 7:34 am
Hey there psal,

That's a pretty darn impressive profile! You hit a lot of the key components. Great GPA? Check. Awesome undergrad institution? Check. Power career out of undergrad? Check. Prestige name for that? Eh, no, but that's ok. Prestige somewhere on the resume? Check. VC experience is great as well and you clearly drove some serious impact. Also, involved? Check.

I'm going to give you two pieces of advice. Firstly, retake the GMAT. You have a strong quant side - no one is doubting that. But even a marginal improvement in your verbal will bump you over the 700 mark. At the moment, a 680 is WELL below the average for H/S/W and you DO NOT want to be in a position where they're accepting you despite your GMAT. The word despite can be a real app killer. So when you have ALL this other stuff going for you, why have everything hinge on a test you can retake? So in your case, you don't have much of an option in my opinion really - if you're shooting for the top, you need to retake.

Also, it seems you are really involved in this non-profit. You might want to consider potentially getting a recommendation from someone high up or influential there. It can really help round out your app and they can talk about different themes.

Overall, you have a strong profile and you should definitely apply to the top 3. You should probably throw in a couple in the top 10 to round out the risk. You don't want to be in a position where you put all your eggs in the H/S/W basket and then be left in lurch going into R2.

I know that wasn't as long as response as some other people get when they post their profiles but there's a little less to say here - you have a good profile! Let me know if you want me to expand on anything or if you have any other questions. Happy to help!

Bhavik
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