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by warraich » Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:47 am
Analysis of Argument topic:
"Over 75% of households in Parksboro have jacuzzi bathtubs. In addition, the average family income in Parksboro is 50% higher than the national average, and a local store reports record-high sales of most costly brands of hair and body products. With so much being spent on personal care Parksboro will be a profitable location for a new Luxe Spa -- a salon that offers premium services at prices higher than above average."

Essay:

The author claims that Parksoboro will be a great location for Luxe Spa based on the presented evidence.However, there are several weaknesses in the evidence used and conclusion made based on this evidence.

First of all, the argument makes no mention of competition. Even if we assume Parksoboro has the all
the right conditions for opening a luxury spa, it may not be a very good idea if there are already
many luxury Spas operating in Parksboro. In a situation like that, it would be very difficult, if not impossible, for Luxe Spa to attract clients who are regulars at other spas in the area. These clients may not switch to Luxe Spa unless there is a very compelling reason for them to do so.

Secondly, author mentions that lot of the residents own Jacuuzzi's in the area as evidence to support his argument. It implies that people who enjoy jacuuzi's would also enjoy luxury spaIt is a huge assumption to say, that anyone who owns a Jaccuzi would also want to visit a luxury Spa. In fact, it could work against the argument of opening a luxury spa in the area. For example, people who own a Jaccuzi may not feel the need to visist a luxury spa because they can enjoy the jaccuzi at home at a much less cost.

The author also cites that average family income in Parksboro is 50% greater than the national average as another reason Luxe spa would do well. This again is not a very compelling piece of data. What would help is to know the Income bracket for a typical luxury spa client. Perhaps the people who go to luxury spas have incomoe at least 100% of the national income. It might be true that some people in Parksboro have incomes higher than 100% of national average but it really depends how many people actually do.

Author makes another assumption that sales of costly hair and body products would also mean high sales for Luxe spa. Hair and body products while costly might still be affordable for most people. Same may not be true for Luxury Spa services and products. Additionally, it is quite possible that at hair and body salons, a typical customer is from a different age or demographic group and the same type of customer may not be interested in a luxury spa at all.

The argument as it stands is very weak as it has been illustrated above. It would help to see additional data in order to validate the assumptions made by the author.
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by warraich » Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:51 am
Analysis of Issue

"The invention of the internet has created more problems than it has solved. Most people would have a higher quality of life had the internet been never invented."

Essay:

Internet has been a revolutionary technology and it has changed our lives for the better. As with the any new technology, internet may have some drawbacks but I am going to argue that on the whole
it has improved our quality of life.

At first there are there are the environmental benefits of internet technology. Previously,
almost all communication between people and businesses was done using regular paper
mail. These days a lot of such communication has shifted to electronic mail, thereby
saving many trees, helping the environment and slowing global warming. Internet
has allowed a lot of employees to work remotely so they never really have to commute
to the office. This again helps with the environment because you have much less
vehicles burning fossil fuels on the road. Moreover, this saves the commute time
for the employees. We have all heard the horror stories of excruciating commutes to
and from work. By not having to commute, employees have freed up several hours in their schedule.
They can spend this time with their families and engage in leisure activities, so internet
has really improved their quality of life.

Internet has allowed for better collaboration and organization around the world. It has
made the world a more connected place. Surgeons sitting in part of the world can now
perform or supervise surgical operations remotely. This was unthinkable before age of internet.
This has allowed patients to be able to tap into skilled doctors anywhere in the globe and
physical distance between locations is not really an issue any more.

Internet also has social implications. We have all witnessed the "Arab spring" where people
in countries like Egypt and Tunisia have been able to organize and protest in order to throw out
repressive regimes. Internet technologies like facebook and twitter had a great role to play
in these revolutions. Previously, governments used to restrict organization of protests
by controlling tv and radio stations. However, they have no way of controlling the internet.
So entire nations have been liberated because of internet and we would not be
better off without it.

Internet does bring some problems with it. Scammers and criminals can hide easily
on the internet. Online scams have become relatively more frequent because there
is no face to face interaction. The person on the other end of the email can pretend to
be anyone. A major example of this is identity theft. With more and more people
shopping and working online, it has become easier to steal someone's personal information
and misuse it. However these problem can be mitigated by taking some easy steps
to protect one's information. For example shop only on reputable websites and protect
your computer with a "firewall" software. We did'nt stop driving cars because of accidents.
Similarly, internet has improved our lives in many different ways and some drawbacks
of internet can be mitigated with appropriate measures.
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by warraich » Thu Jun 09, 2011 1:33 pm
A reminder to please rate my essay. My exam date is coming up soon.
Thanks,
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