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by nidhis.1408 » Mon Oct 08, 2012 8:20 am
Concerns about cyber crimes led to the passing between 1990 and 2010 of various cyber laws to serve regular internet users.


(A) Concerns about cyber crimes led to the passing between 1990 and 2010 of various cyber laws to serve
(B) Concerns about cyber crimes have led to the passing of various cyber laws between 1990 and 2010 to serve

(C) Concerns about cyber crimes have led building 1990 and 2010 to various cyber laws for serving

(D) There were concerns about cyber crimes leading to the passing between 1990 and 2010 of various cyber laws serving

(E) There were concerns leading between 1990 and 2010 to the passing of various cyber laws for serving
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by Jim@StratusPrep » Mon Oct 08, 2012 9:05 am
A) you want to say the passing of cyber laws, so put those segments together.

B) Correct

C) The concerns did not lead to building they led to the creation of new laws

D) Same as A

E) Same as A and D
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by gmatdriller » Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:03 am
Jim@StratusPrep wrote:A) you want to say the passing of cyber laws, so put those segments together.

B) Correct
Jim@StratusPrep wrote:A) you want to say the passing of cyber laws, so put those segments together.

B) Correct
Hi Jim, i tried understanding your explanations on this question compared to that on the posts below (i) The rapid rise in the number of motor-vehicle related fatalities
https://www.beatthegmat.com/sc-wordy-con ... tml#483700

and
(ii) The proliferation of so-called cybersquatters...
https://www.beatthegmat.com/the-cybersqu ... 11474.html

First, "The passing of an Act" also correct compared to "The passage of an Act"?

Second,
"The passing between 1990 and 2010 of an Act" ...is wrong while
"The passing of an Act between 1990 and 2012"...is correct?

Am trying to understand whether the phrase is wrong as it is and as reflected on your analysis of the above highlighted post or whether there are some missing gaps somewhere else.

Thanks as I look forward to your incisive analysis.
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