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by AnjaliOberoi » Mon Dec 16, 2013 9:18 pm
Instead of buying stocks and bonds, which is the more conventional approach for someone new to
financial planning, real estate has become increasingly attractive to young people looking for a first investment.


"¢ Instead of buying stocks and bonds, which is the more conventional approach for someone new to
financial planning, real estate has become increasingly attractive to young people as a first investment.
"¢ Instead of buying stocks and bonds, which is the more conventional approach for those new to
financial planning, young people have shown an increasing attraction to real estate as a first
investment.
"¢ Rather than buying stocks and bonds, which is the more conventional approach for someone new to
financial planning, real estate has become increasingly attractive to young people looking for a first
investment.
"¢ Rather than buy stocks and bonds, which are the more conventional instruments for those new to
financial planning, young people have turned increasingly to real estate as a first investment.
"¢ Instead of stocks and bonds, which are the more conventional approach for those new to financial
planning, young people have shown an increasing attraction to real estate as a first investment.


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by theCodeToGMAT » Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:41 pm
{A} - INCORRECT; "Instead of" is always used with Nouns
{B} - INCORRECT; "Instead of" is always used with Nouns
{C} - INCORRECT; "real estate" is not buying stocks & bonds
{D} - CORRECT
{E} - INCORRECT; there is no "approach" in "Instead of stocks and bonds"
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