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Improving Parallelism

by sureng » Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:04 pm
Can some one pls. help me on the below parallelism? I am trying to explain 3 things in GMAT way but after 'and' i don't think i expressed the sentence correctly.


"I created another test account,subscribed to couple of groups and could see all the groups discussions"
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by sureng » Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:08 pm
I think noticed will fit correctly(?)

"I created another test account,subscribed to couple of groups and noticed all the groups discussions"
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by AIM GMAT » Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:46 am
sureng wrote:I think noticed will fit correctly(?)

"I created another test account,subscribed to couple of groups and noticed all the groups discussions"
This sentence seems correct .
Thanks & Regards,
AIM GMAT
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by sureng » Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:04 am
Thanks AIM for the confirmation..
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