Improving Parallelism

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sureng: Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts; Posts: 23; Joined: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:25 pm

by sureng » Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:04 pm

Can some one pls. help me on the below parallelism? I am trying to explain 3 things in GMAT way but after 'and' i don't think i expressed the sentence correctly.

"I created another test account,subscribed to couple of groups and could see all the groups discussions"

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sureng: Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts; Posts: 23; Joined: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:25 pm

by sureng » Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:08 pm

I think noticed will fit correctly(?)

"I created another test account,subscribed to couple of groups and noticed all the groups discussions"

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by AIM GMAT » Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:46 am

sureng wrote:I think noticed will fit correctly(?)

"I created another test account,subscribed to couple of groups and noticed all the groups discussions"

This sentence seems correct .

Thanks & Regards,
AIM GMAT

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sureng: Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts; Posts: 23; Joined: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:25 pm

by sureng » Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:04 am

Thanks AIM for the confirmation..

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