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by btgsnt » Mon Mar 10, 2014 6:35 am
Hi All,
please explain the parallelism for the below example.
The museum displays the work of a wide variety of artists, from those who are world-renowned to who are virtually unknown.

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by [email protected] » Mon Mar 10, 2014 12:05 pm
Hi btgsnt,

The phrase "from ______ to ________" requires parallel phrasing/format.

To be parallel, the sentence should read:

"....from those who are world-renowned to THOSE who are virtually unknown."

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