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by sana.noor » Tue Sep 10, 2013 12:07 am
Some patients who do not respond to therapies for depression may simply have received inadequate treatment, having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been taken off a drug too soon.
(A) having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been
(B) having, for example, a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
(C) as, for example, having too low of a dosage of a prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
(D) when they have, for example, been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
(E) for example, when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been

for me its A and i dont have its OA
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by vinay1983 » Tue Sep 10, 2013 2:49 am
I am not sure about A, but among the options it looks OK!
You can, for example never foretell what any one man will do, but you can say with precision what an average number will be up to!

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by faraz_jeddah » Tue Sep 10, 2013 2:50 am
sana.noor wrote:Some patients who do not respond to therapies for depression may simply have received inadequate treatment, having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been taken off a drug too soon.
(A) having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been
(B) having, for example, a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
(C) as, for example, having too low of a dosage of a prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
(D) when they have, for example, been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
(E) for example, when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been

for me its A and i dont have its OA
These are some tough SCs you are posting today.

I would stick with A for parallelism.
B and C have 'being' which is almost always wrong.
D is not parallel - have and were
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by vinay1983 » Tue Sep 10, 2013 8:25 am
These are some tough SCs you are posting today.
@faraz I really think sana.noor had some tough questions for breakfast and lunch today :wink:

I wonder what is the source of these questions.
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by sana.noor » Tue Sep 10, 2013 7:50 pm
all question that i posted are either from gmatprep, kaplan or manhattan
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by theCodeToGMAT » Mon Sep 16, 2013 6:37 am
sana.noor wrote:Some patients who do not respond to therapies for depression may simply have received inadequate treatment, having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been taken off a drug too soon.
(A) having, for example, been prescribed a drug at a dosage too low to be effective or having been
(B) having, for example, a drug prescription that was ineffective because the dosage was too low, or being
(C) as, for example, having too low of a dosage of a prescribed drug for it to be effective, or being
(D) when they have, for example, been prescribed too low a drug dosage for it to be effective, or were
(E) for example, when they have a drug prescription with a dosage too low to be effective, or been

for me its A and i dont have its OA



The Answer must be "A" only. Since,
: we cannot use "being" here.
[C]: "As" & "being" are incorrectly used; also, sentence is very awkward.
[D]: "when" is used for a specific period; also, parallelism is shaky
[E]: "when" is used for a specific period; also, parallelism is shaky

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