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Please evaluate my Profile

by moneymoney » Fri Aug 31, 2012 7:16 am
1) Brief description of your full-time work experience.
Started directly after my engineering in Biotechnology to join as a Research Associate at Evalueserve in Intellectual Property Research in Healthcare and Consumer Goods Sector. I worked here for 3.4 years. Got one promotion notably during recession when otherwise 10 people were laid off in my team and then got internal responsibility position promotion as Project manager.
Left to join Grail Research, to gain more experience of business aspect of healthcare industry in the Market Research Team. I wanted more out of my experience and really figure out my next logical step so I left Grail after 10 months.
Started freelancing in Intellectual Property and exploring start up options and work on my major weakness in People engagement, due to which I was also not growing as I envisioned. During this period I traveled worked with several non-profits and profits along with my family business, grew my cycling club and also worked on my comm skills at Toastmasters. I was looking for entrepreneurial opportunities in Healthcare/Energy space so I worked with few start ups for free... After 10 months of all this I did not find courage to start on my own due to some financial reasons and long gestation period in healthcare. I have recently joined a innovative start up in healthcare whom I met at a networking event and plan to grow this early stage start up with the product I am responsible to build by March next year and learn healthcare industry in safe environment of other's risk.
Post MBA I want to come back to this start up with increased skills or launch my own business or work in healthcare industry.

2) Your GMAT.
720

3) College info: Panjab University, Chandigarh, India. BE Biotechnology 2007, 62% (3.69/4.0 as per WES report)

4) Significant college and post-college extra-curricular activities or community service, especially leadership experience.
1. Student head of placements at Engineering
2. Administrator of Pedal Pushers, Biking Club in Delhi
3. CC Award Toastmasters
4. Paper Published in Biotechnology National Journal
5. Done evening diplomas in French and German languages

5) Important certifications like CFA, CPA, FSA, or CA.

Small certification in finance (4.0/4.0) - granted by National Stock Exchange , India

6) Your target programs.
1st Choice: Kellogg, Yale, Fuqua, Haas
2nd Choice: ISB, NUS, Texas A&M Mays, Boston Univ


A) Are my choices (Target schools) and goals realistic, or should I make some adjustements?
B) How to unify my work ex profile as there is little break, but it is genuine well thought break I took
C) How to differentiate myself
D) How to take on the failure essay

Thanks in advance for the answer.
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by milimbamission » Tue Sep 04, 2012 3:07 pm
Hi Tarun,

I think your professional history is pretty interesting and sounds like you've consistently been working towards a healthcare start-up career. I think you'll be able to demonstrate your entrepreneurial side and leverage the 10 month 'gap' to do so since you were working in startups at that time. Alternatively, you could position your leave from your old job as a 'failure' -- you failed to demonstrate your people skills/recognize the importance of people skills in the professional world, had to leave your job and embarked on a self-reflection journey and pushed yourself outside your comfort zone... Could try to spin the gap as a way to address a failure or shortcoming that you were made aware of. I'd need to know more about the story, but this is just one idea.

Academically, I think you've got a strong GPA and a strong GMAT score. Professional story is certainly interesting and will stand out. It's great that you moved out of a tech background and into the business side of things -- takes you out of the Indian IT Male applicant pool. Extracurricular is strong with the cycling club and Toastmasters, though I don't see much in the way of community service. I'd say that's the big gap in your profile.

I think your target programs are realistic, with Kellogg and Haas being the reach programs on your list. I still think you should submit applications there though, because they strongly align with you interests. Yale, Duke, and ISB are great and also realistic targets. The others should be good safe choices.

I think your differentiator is going to be your non traditional work experience/path and your cycling club. Perhaps you have other personal stories that could help you stand apart as well. It is difficult for me to say without getting to know your profile in more depth, which we can't do in this limited space. The same goes for your failure essay - I mentioned one potential idea above, but I'd need to know your full in-depth profile to be able to give you a good answer. If you're interested in starting this kind of discussion, you might consider signing up for a free 30 minute phone consultation with our team: https://www.mbamission.com/consult.php.

Good luck!
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