Even though her career was cut short when she was in her

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Even though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as technically, Olive Fremstad (1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten by opera aficionados.


A. though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were

B. though her career was cut short while in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she made

C. as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she had made

D. with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the fifteen recordings she made were

E. with her career cut short while in her prime, and that the fifteen recordings she made were

OA A

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What's wrong with C?

Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts
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C tends to mean that she purposely made the recording disappointing , which is wrong. the recording turned out to be disappointing. Hence A is right

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