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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Sun Jun 20, 2010 8:38 am
the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it was a major cause of the 1999 strike in Seattle.

A.same
B. communication between the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it
C. for the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively
D.the inability of the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively
E. the machine press union,being unable to communicate effectively with company management.

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by sumanr84 » Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:08 am
Please underline the incorrect portion of the sentence. You have neither underlined nor given option A.
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by sumanr84 » Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:35 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it was a major cause of the 1999 strike in Seattle.

A.same - two independent claused joined only by AND -- Wrong, need COMMA + AND, "IT" antecedent is unknown here.

B. communication between the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it - Awkward

C. for the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively - No main clause

D.the inability of the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively - Awkward

E. the machine press union,being unable to communicate effectively with company management. - Correct

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IMO:E
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by andrey_tsi » Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:49 am
Answer E

Explanation of sumanr84 is very good

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by loveusonu » Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:16 pm
the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it was a major cause of the 1999 strike in Seattle.

A.the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it was a major cause of the 1999 strike in Seattle. --> INCORRECT: "IT" has no refferent, 'it' should ideally point to communication, which is not the noun over here.

B. communication between the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it -->INCORRECT: communication and communicate is repeated makes it awkward.

C. for the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively-->CORRECT: The sentence is a passive structure and conveys the meaning. Also 'for' seems to stands for because over here.

D.the inability of the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively-->INCORRECT:'the inability" has the plural verb "were"

E. the machine press union,being unable to communicate effectively with company management. -->INCORRECT: the verb 'was' seems to refer to "the machine press union" while the communication seems to be the problem.

IMO C..Whats the OA?
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by FightWithGMAT » Tue Jun 22, 2010 5:59 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it was a major cause of the 1999 strike in Seattle.

A.same
B. communication between the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively and it
C. for the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively
D.the inability of the machine press union and company management were not able to communicate effectively
E. the machine press union,being unable to communicate effectively with company management.

plz explain yr answer
The question has a typo in option D. Please post only questions from reliable sources.
D says:
the inability of the machine press union and company management to communicate effectively

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by martin.jonson007 » Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:27 am
all option are INCORRECT...!

every option consists big errors...!

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by Haaress » Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:37 am
One more for E.

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by gmatmachoman » Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:50 am
martin.jonson007 wrote:all option are INCORRECT...!

every option consists big errors...!

hahahhhah.. big LOL

what does"was" refer to??? what is the subject??? I dont think this is a valid one....

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