anthracite coalfields

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anthracite coalfields

by maihuna » Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:32 am
In the 1820's, anthracite coalfields opened in eastern Pennsylvania, and when canals and eventually railroads reached into the region, there were substantial supplies of coal that was exported to the nation's growing mills, forges, factories, and railways.
A. when canals and eventually railroads reached into the region, there were
substantial supplies of coal that was
B. once canals and eventually railroads reaching into the region, there were
substantial supplies of coal having been
C. with canals and eventually railroads reaching into the region, there had been
substantial supplies of coal
D. canals and eventually railroads reached into the region, with substantial supplies
of coal being
E. as canals and eventually railroads reached into the region, substantial supplies of
coal were
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by gmatv09 » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:54 am
IMO E

[spoiler]Ruled out A becoz => there were substantial supplies of coal that was [/spoiler]

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by tanviet » Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:04 am
A use 2 clauses. E use one clause. E is more concise.

there is+that clause is wordy. one clause sentence is concise. remember this. no need further explanation

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