In order to ensure that chemical reaction in the lab behave

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In order to ensure that chemical reaction in the lab behave as predicted by their mathematical formulas, it is important the heat be applied evenly over the total surface area of the flask instead of a series of irregular points on the surface.
A) instead of
B) as compared with
C) in contrast with
D) rather than to
E) as against being at

Although this is a simple question I'm not totally convinced regarding the solution.
Please explain why each option is incorrect.
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by KarenVH » Sat Feb 20, 2016 12:23 pm
The OA must be (D). That is the one answer that is clear, unambiguous, and more or less correct grammatically - though I see a flaw even in (D).

(A) uses "instead of," which suggests that the surface area of the flask is being offered as a replacement for the idea of a series of irregular points. The sentence is clearly talking about choosing between options, not replacing anything, so "rather than" is preferable. Moreover, "instead of" is unclear because "a series of irregular points" is a noun phrase, so it would have to be read as parallel to the noun phrase "total surface area of the flask." In other words, the sentence would mean something like "it is important the heat be applied evenly over the total surface area of the flask instead of over a series of irregular points on the surface."

B and C bring in an idea of comparison or contrast, which does not fit the meaning of the sentence. The sentence is about deciding where to apply heat, not making comparisons. E also suggests a comparison but is even less clear than B or C.

I believe there is a small flaw in (D) as well; this question is reminiscent of an OG question, and if I can find that one I'll be curious to see whether it has the same flaw. The flaw is that (D) literally means something like "...it is important that the heat be applied evenly over the total surface area of the flask, rather than applied evenly at a series of irregular points on the surface." It's a bit odd to suggest that the heat is to be applied evenly in both cases, and I suspect that was an oversight on the part of the question writer. I think it would have been better if it had said something like "...it is important that the heat be applied evenly over the total surface area of the flask rather than directed to a series of irregular points on the surface."

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by MartyMurray » Sat Feb 20, 2016 8:11 pm
The version created using choice D makes sense.

The sentence so created conveys the following.

In order to ensure that chemical reactions in the lab behave as predicted by their mathematical formulas, it is important the heat be applied

evenly over the total surface area of the flask

rather than

to a series of irregular points on the surface.

So the heat could be applied evenly over the total surface area of the flask,

or

the heat could be applied to a series of irregular points on the surface.
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