what's horrible in it?
b) sequence of time is broken - is committing + committed
c) corporations-plural, possessive pronoun 'its' singular
d) corporations -many of them, an employee-one employee of those corporations? illogical sense
e) whose employees vs. the employee - which employee, unclear reference to one of the employees? illogical sense
the selection of a) was straight and quick
In many nations, criminal law does not apply to corporations, but in the United Stated today, a corporation commits a crime whenever one of its employees commits a crime, if the employee acted within the scope of his or her authority and if the corporation benefited as a result.
A. a corporation commits a crime whenever one of its employees commits a crime, if the employee acted
B. a corporation is committing a crime whenever one of its employees committed a crime, if those employees were acting
C. corporations commit a crime whenever one of its employees does, on the
condition that the employee acts
D. corporations commit crimes whenever an employee of those corporations commit a crime, if it was while acting
E. the corporation whose employees commit a crime, commits a crime, whenever the employee acted
I think the answer is C, it is the right answer?