request feedback for my essay

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roopa ramesh: Newbie | Next Rank: 10 Posts; Posts: 7; Joined: Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:28 am

by roopa ramesh » Sat Oct 11, 2014 9:32 am

Dear Sir,

PFA a file where in I have written 3 essays.

I request you to go through each one and give me very specific feedback to improve the essay. I want to score at least 5 on the essay.

Do help me. My exam is on: 22nd Oct'14.

reg

Roopa
Hyderabad
India

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