it deserves what?? please rate...

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it deserves what?? please rate...

by Alpturk » Fri May 22, 2009 12:25 pm
NOWADAYS PEOPLE HAVE TO MUCH FREE TIME.

DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THAT?


As the technology is improving day by day, the lives of people is becoming easier than before. Technology enables people to have too much free time. Nowadays, people use washing machines and use internet to order meal from restaurant. Consequently, people spend too much time with their friends and families. I strongly agree with the statement that people have too much free time nowadays.

First of all, people can save too much time by using internet. Let us imagine a student who wants to find a book for his or her homework. To get this book will take too much time, if he or she does not use internet. She or he will ask all libraries to find this book. As you can imagine, it will take too much time. On the other hand, if he uses internet to find this book, it will not take too much time. He can order this book from online store. Consequently, he can save too much time.

Secondly, most people worked in the offices two decades ago.
it took too much time to go to the office and return to the home. On the other hand, some corporation apply the home office programs. People can work in their homes and participate meeting by using video communication. In the near future, most corporations will use home office program to increase the productivity of their employees. Moreover, development of food technology enables people to save too much time. If you need to eat something, you can prepare hamburger or pizza by yourself in a short time.

In summary, nowadays people have too much free time. Technology enables people to save too much time. If anybody wants to have much free time, he has to use technology such as internet. I do not understand why some people disagree with me. I wish they felt the same way.
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