Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

by pnk » Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:26 am
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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and


[spoiler]OA: C

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for B - 'carefully coordinating...' illogically modifies preceeding noun (book illustrations)
for E - 'them' can't refer to "book illustrations" bcoz the plural noun is the object of the prep in
for C - correct placement of modifying elements; the use of 'which' clearly links the two elements

my doubt: in C - which (pronoun) refers to 'book illustrations' even though its part of prep phrase. But the same rule does not apply to pronoun 'them'.

Is this a general rule that 'which can refer to noun eventhough its part of a preposition phrase whereas 'other pronouns such as 'that/them' do not
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by hardik.jadeja » Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:34 am
The rule is - the pronoun "which" almost always refers to noun on the immediate left of the comma.

There are exceptions though. Read this post: https://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/post4622.html#p4622

"them" doesn't follow this rule.
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by uwhusky » Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:37 am
I think you may have mistakenly identify the clause as preposition phrase, and equate "which" with "in which".

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by crh » Sun May 29, 2011 8:33 pm
Hello,
Reopening an old thread. Could someone plz explain why "E" is incorrect. Why is "them" in correct in Option "E"? Can't "them" refer to "her book illustrations"?

Is there any concept am missing?

Thanks
crh

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