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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:10 am
Teratomas are unusual forms of cancer because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears.

A. because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone
B. because they are composed of tissues like tooth and bone that are
C. because they are composed of tissues, like tooth and bone, tissues
D. in that their composition , tissues such as tooth and bone, is
E. in that they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone, tissues

can somebody tell me the rule with answers
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by gmatmachoman » Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:12 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:Teratomas are unusual forms of cancer because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears.

A. because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone
B. because they are composed of tissues like tooth and bone that are
C. because they are composed of tissues, like tooth and bone, tissues
D. in that their composition , tissues such as tooth and bone, is
E. in that they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone, tissues

can somebody tell me the rule with answers
Pick E

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by clock60 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:15 am
not sure in E
what about C??

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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:15 am
plz tell me the rule or plz explain

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by gmatmachoman » Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:24 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:plz tell me the rule or plz explain
When u r introducing examples use "such as"..So we are left with A & E.

Why E??

Appositive "tissues" tells more about the nouns " tooth and bone". Comma+ Appositves gives a fair idea about the noun it is describing.

BTW wats the OA??

E gives a proper reason of why Teratomas is unusual.Look for the intended meaning.

A .Teratomas are unusual forms of cancer because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone ????not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears.

This fails to describe "what" is not normally found!!

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by blaster » Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:48 am
can someone explain,why C is wrong?

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by sumanr84 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:52 am
blaster wrote:can someone explain,why C is wrong?
First,
LIKE is not for giving examples in GMAT. We have to use SUCH AS for examples.

Second,
GMAT prefers "in that" over "because".
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by loveusonu » Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:15 am
I had solved this question earlier and for the record kept the below explanation from ERIN in that(not because) it explains difference between 'in that' and 'because':

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Hello there, tsdvj! First, it was kind of hard to read this SC with neither underlining nor a repeat of answer A, so I added underlining to your original post.

Okay, on to your question. We have a couple of things happening at the same time. Let's do the easy ones first.

First, we have the like vs. such as grammar point. Are you familiar with this one? It's quite common in SC. Here it is:

like: used to express similarity: Lemons are like limes. Okay, that's easy, right? Right. But look at this mistake:

I want you to buy me some fruits like lemons and limes.

This sentence is most likely wrong because the sentence actually means that I want you NOT to buy me lemons and limes; I want you to buy me some fruits that are SIMILAR TO lemons and limes.

I want you to buy me some fruits such as lemons and limes.

such as can be seen to mean "for example," so this sentence essentially means that I want you to buy me lemons and limes and perhaps any other similar fruit.

VXU has correctly pointed out the modifier question, and he is absolutely right. I would like to add, though, that we should not simply eliminate any answer choice just because the modifier is not right next to its noun; it is very easy to formulate a correct sentence with a bit of separation between the modifier and the "modified." For example:

I very much liked the people in India who showed me around.

You can see that who showed me around modifies people but is next to in India, but the sentence is correct simply because it doesn't cause any confusion.

Next, we should also be aware of the difference between because and in that. First, using pure strategy, when ETS puts both because and in that, the answer is most likely in that. Second, because is used to express a simple causal relationship whereas in that qualifies the previous statement.

Confused? Look at these examples:

Cause and effect relationship: I went to sleep because I was tired. ==> Being tired caused me to go to sleep.

Qualification: Going to college is a sacrifice in that doing so requires several years of forgoing the income that students could have earned had they not attended college. ==> Going to college is a sacrifice, BUT NOT IN EVERY WAY; there are many ways in which going to college is NOT a sacrifice, but in this sentence, I want to express one way in which going to college IS a sacrifice.

In our SC, "in that" is more precise than "because." "because" is actually wrong in this sentence, but a lot of my students, when they ask about this question, adamantly believe that it is correct, so instead of explaining why "because" is wrong, I explain why "in that" is better. This usually does the trick.

This point make sense? (Raghuveer--if you're reading this, please note the absence of "Does." ) I hope so, but please be sure to post back for clarification. (Edit: The comment to Raghuveer was made in reference to a question he asked earlier about omitting the do in questions in spoken English in this thread)

Finally, many students will think that E is wrong because it repeats the word "tissues." There are many different ways to explain why this is correct, but the easiest way for me now (if you understand some grammar terms) is to say that it is okay to repeat the noun for clarification. For those of you who know grammar well, the second "tissues" can be seen as a reduction of "which are tissues," what we often refer to as a "reduced adjective clause."

Hope that helps!!
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by adi_800 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:18 am
sumanr84 wrote:
blaster wrote:can someone explain,why C is wrong?
First,
LIKE is not for giving examples in GMAT. We have to use SUCH AS for examples.

Second,
GMAT prefers "in that" over "because".
I dont think I have seen any OG or OFFICIAL question in which GMAT preferred in that to because.
If it is there, then can anyone point me to that thread or question?

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by sumanr84 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:37 am
adi_800 wrote: I dont think I have seen any OG or OFFICIAL question in which GMAT preferred in that to because.
If it is there, then can anyone point me to that thread or question?
I am not 100% sure. OG12 does not have anything like that but someone needs to check in OG11.
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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:37 am
yes adi i put this question just to share that in that is prrffered to because.

so blindly follow this rule. E is correct
thanks suman for notes

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by GMATGuruNY » Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:47 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:Teratomas are unusual forms of cancer because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears.

A. because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone
B. because they are composed of tissues like tooth and bone that are
C. because they are composed of tissues, like tooth and bone, tissues
D. in that their composition , tissues such as tooth and bone, is
E. in that they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone, tissues

can somebody tell me the rule with answers
Easiest and quickest approach:

Answer choices B and C use like to introduce examples. Like is used to compare nouns. Such as is used to introduce examples. Eliminate B and C.

What are not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears? The tissues that the teratoma is composed of. So the modifying phrase not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears needs to be next to the noun tissues. Eliminate A and D.

The correct answer is E.
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by loveusonu » Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:04 am
GMATGuruNY wrote:
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:Teratomas are unusual forms of cancer because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears.

A. because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone
B. because they are composed of tissues like tooth and bone that are
C. because they are composed of tissues, like tooth and bone, tissues
D. in that their composition , tissues such as tooth and bone, is
E. in that they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone, tissues

can somebody tell me the rule with answers
Easiest and quickest approach:

Answer choices B and C use like to introduce examples. Like is used to compare nouns. Such as is used to introduce examples. Eliminate B and C.

What are not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears? The tissues that the teratoma is composed of. So the modifying phrase not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears needs to be next to the noun tissues. Eliminate A and D.

The correct answer is E.
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