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by GMATGuruNY » Tue Aug 02, 2016 2:45 am
zoe wrote: Hi GuruNY,
I am confused that"A noun cannot be modified by a gerund"
I've revised my post above.
A VERBing can function as a NOUN or as a MODIFIER.
A VERBing that functions as a noun is called a gerund.

D: the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury
Here, causing is not a gerund but a MODIFIER serving to describe the act.
Question: What KIND of act?
Answer: the act CAUSING the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
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laws requiring turtle-excluder devices

this is correct sentence,
here laws requiring..
it is Noun + gerund
Here, requiring is not a gerund but a MODIFIER serving to describe laws.
Question: What KIND of laws?
Answer: laws REQUIRING turtle-excluder devices.
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by sagarock » Tue Aug 02, 2016 4:22 am
Mitch sir,why prep+noun+ing is incorrect ,can you please explain this in layman term? I Have searched various forums but still not able to get a satisfactory answer.
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by GMATGuruNY » Tue Aug 02, 2016 6:15 am
sagarock wrote:Mitch sir,why prep+noun+ing is incorrect ,can you please explain this in layman term? I Have searched various forums but still not able to get a satisfactory answer.

PREPOSITION + NOUN + VERBing is a valid construction.
SC26 in the OG12:
over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage
Here, the portion in red = PREPOSITION (over) + NOUN (a period) + VERBing (beginning).

In many cases, however, PREPOSITION + NOUN + VERBing will distort the intended meaning and thus will be incorrect.
In answer choice D, this construction is invalid because it distorts the intended meaning.
For an explanation, please see my revised second post above.
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by zoe » Tue Aug 02, 2016 7:49 pm
GMATGuruNY wrote: Here, requiring is not a gerund but a MODIFIER serving to describe laws.
Question: What KIND of laws?
Answer: laws REQUIRING turtle-excluder devices.
Hi GuruNY,
would you please give me some examples to distinct the difference of Verbing between gerund and modifier?

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by Mo2men » Wed Aug 03, 2016 9:50 am
GMATGuruNY wrote: I received a PM asking me to offer a quick approach.

In A, this has no clear antecedent. Eliminate A.

B is not a complete sentence. Where are the subject and the verb? Eliminate B.

C and D each state that the stinger...results in. A stinger cannot result in something; only an action can result in something. Eliminate C and D.

The correct answer is E.
In correct choice E:
The honeybee's stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes.....

what does 'with the result that the..' modify? which sentence?

As far as I know 'with...' modifer answer question 'how does the action happened'. I see nonsensical to say:

How does stinger stay?

it stays with that the act of stinging causes.
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by GMATGuruNY » Thu Aug 04, 2016 3:26 am
Mo2men wrote:what does 'with the result that the..' modify? which sentence?
Generally, COMMA + with the result that serves to introduce the RESULT of the preceding clause.
The stinger stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
Here, the portion in red is the result of the preceding clause in blue.
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